Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The authors prompt says governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive because its the cities where a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated. I tend to disagree with the prompt for a couple of reasons. First being the major cities usually lose their originality due to competition in today's world.Also its the mostly the other cities where you would find the culture and traditions characteristic of the country.Thirdly If its only the major cities that get the attention financially from the government then the other cities and rural towns and villages will be deprived of development, lets dive deeper into these reasons and examples.
As a first in today's fast paced world most major cities are busy in competing with other major cities of the world in the process of which they tend to lose their own traditions and culture. This majorly happened as in the process of competition the major cities and even the population living their tries imitating other cities in aspects like style of living,amenities, development of infrastructure etc. So if the government's aim is to push all their financial support to just these major cities for preserving the culture and traditions this doesn't quite support the conclusion of the author.
Also its the other cities and rural towns and villages in most countries where you will find the culture and traditions still alive. So if the government wants to preserve and strengthen these then it must provide financial support to these other cities,towns and villages as well. As this would not only help boost tourism to the nation but also give and authentic representation of the nation to the outside world.
In addition to this if a government only keeps on financially supporting these major cities then these other cities,rural towns and villages then the very essence of culture and tradition of the country will be lost as the progress and development of these other cities and rural areas will be inhibited and tourists won't really get to explore the real flavor of the nation at best.
In conclusion I would like to say that the author's prompt is that government's must ensure financial support to their major cities for preserving culture and traditions is not agreeable at all not unless the government also supports equally the other cities and rural areas of their country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, still, then, third, thirdly, well, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0675 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73997148708 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.784714293 60.3974514979 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.272727273 118.986275619 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3636363636 23.4991977007 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 5.21951772744 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431713130375 0.243740707755 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201009446893 0.0831039109588 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152135386901 0.0758088955206 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279610909858 0.150359130593 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106267196465 0.0667264976115 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 14.1392134831 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 48.8420337079 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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