Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.Write a response in which you

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Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.

Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.

Some faction of people believe that funding provided by the government to various arts is must so that arts can flourish and available to all people.While some argue that doing so will threaten the integrity of the arts.To argue that it affects the truthfulness of arts requires a case by case studies on the basis of that we can agree with the later group of people.

Globally,many artists are there who are renowned for their meticulous efforts in creating a masterpiece of architecture,painting etc;but before becoming famous they needed some kind of boast so that they could display their creation to global audience.So let's say that there is a person X who is excellent at creating paintings just like a famous renowned Indian artist M.F.Hussain,but that person does not have enough money to showcase his art through exhibitions to the world.In such circumstances that person might need the help of the government aid.So government funding provided in this type of cases can prove to fruitful for the emergence of great artist and also for the development of that art.

Also sometimes the artists have the vision to create something that has never been made or seen before by anyone.For instance if some architect desires to build a monument that is unprecedented in its modern architecture just like one of the seven wonders of the world TajMahal in Agra,India which is unprecedented in its ancient architecture in the world; and even has a plan for the monument which the artist want to create is ready.But to build such a magnificent monument it might require government funding as thousands of crores are invested to build such a monument which not only brings tourist attraction at that place but also can increase employment in that area where the construction work is going on.

However,the later group of people refuting government aid provided to the artists might be true in the following sense that art comes out best when it is created or performed without any external dependence.Also the artists might get influenced in creating their art due to some external political advise.Also when the country's financial position is not so good and instead of helping the poor if the government goes on in helping artists to create their desired architecture can prove to be futile to denizen's welfare.

To sum up there are various cases that are taken into consideration where government aid can not only help a poor but ingenious artist to showcase their art to the world but also help in developing or growth of that art.Also this kind of help from the government can help in increasing employment and also tourist revenue by providing money to the artist to create an unprecedented architecture.However the later faction of people might also be true about the effects that this kind of funding makes on an art's integrity but those effects can be considered negligible or one's which can be ignored for some point of time when considering the positive outcomes that government aid has on development and growth of art.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for instance, kind of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 30.0 11.3162921348 265% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2533.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 508.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98622047244 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9530308271 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444881889764 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 787.5 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 101.0 23.0359550562 438% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.027140226 60.3974514979 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 506.6 118.986275619 426% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 101.6 23.4991977007 432% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.4 5.21951772744 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316975048952 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204644851325 0.0831039109588 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128108160591 0.0758088955206 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204644851325 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128108160591 0.0667264976115 192% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.9 14.1392134831 374% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -31.04 48.8420337079 -64% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 42.7 12.1743820225 351% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.85 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.91 8.38706741573 142% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.4 11.2143820225 378% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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