Some people believe that government officials must carry out the will of the people they serve. Others believe that officials should base their decisions on their own judgment.
The author in the issue states a coflicting belief of people regarding the decisions to be taken by the goverment officials based on either the will of people or on their own judgement. As these kinds of issues are always controversial and people share different beliefs based on their own opinions. According to my prospectives, I am in harmony with the people those believe that the government officials must render decisions based on the will of the people. There are certain reasons that provides a concrete proof to my acknowledgement.
Firstly, in a democratic country where the results of elections are based on the will of majority of people, it is essential to yield to the will of the people before rendering a decision. Meanwhile, the decisions taken based on the will of people will always give an approbating response from the people. It is crucial to ask the people regarding their needs and requirements that are prior to other subjective decisions. Hence, based on the requirements of people, the decision taken will always have a positive impact and it will placate the needs of people.
Secondly, an opinion from the public should always be welcomed as it can result into better and improvised decision than the one taken based on the own judgement of the officials. As the government officials serve the people, it will be a wise decision to account the requirements of the people and based on those requirements, render a decision. Moreover, it is evident that the government officials will be approbated by the public for such a favorable decision.
On the contrary, sometimes the decisions taken based on the will of people creates prejudices as some people will always be discordant to those decisions. Hence, it is prudent to take decisions based on own judgement as it is indifferent to the diverse locale of people. Moreover, the government officials, based on the past experience and through their keen insight can take cautious decisions which, however cannot be taken based on the will of the people. Hence, we can say that there are certain proverbs that held credible the fact that decisions must be based on the judgement of the government officials. But, there are many reasons that oppose it.
Summing up my opinions stated above I adduce that the decisions taken according to the will of people are optimal, have a better outcome and are supported by the people. Hence, I conclude that the government officials must carry out decisions based on the will of people they serve.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... the government officials, based on the past experience and through their keen insight can take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96453900709 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78323592321 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.385342789598 0.4932671777 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8841663799 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453374500514 0.243740707755 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166779149674 0.0831039109588 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121706745474 0.0758088955206 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289148430501 0.150359130593 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798505571412 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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