Being selected as a representative of people, government officials should carry out the will of people according to the meaning of democracy. I generally agree with the idea of representing people's will, however, I think the methods should mainly be based on governors' decisions.
Government officials should be careful with their actions and be meticulous about carrying out people's will, otherwise they will lose their position. In European history, tyrannies in British and France abused their forces without awareness of people's ideas, thus revolutions broke out and they were forced to give in their power.
Government officials should be a representative of people owing to the meaning and procedure of election. During an election, citizens choose a governor who is willing to apply policies that generally suit people's will. How can one be a good governor if he does not represent people's will?
Nevertheless, the methods and details of policies can be mainly based on the governor's decisions. Generally, the officials people selected are the most talented and visionary ones among all competitors, thus they would have the ability and wisdom to figure out the details of policies. However, generally the purpose of the policies should be determined by people they serve.
As I have discussed above, it is clear that government officials should carry out the will of the people, while the details and the methods of their policies could be based on their own decisions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, thus, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 237.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28691983122 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81241274955 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3867665095 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.909090909 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411583630729 0.243740707755 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185715911924 0.0831039109588 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10062603162 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267064920519 0.150359130593 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068314715839 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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