Some people believe that it is helpful to view a challenging situation as an opportunity for personal growth Others believe that reimagining challenging situations this way occupies too much of the focus one needs to face challenges effectively Write a re

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Some people believe that it is helpful to view a challenging situation as an opportunity for personal growth. Others believe that reimagining challenging situations this way occupies too much of the focus one needs to face challenges effectively.

Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.

Human-beings are social creatures and the matter mentioned in the prompt requires a broad approach to be able to be conceived. I mostly agree with the prompt since, I think dealing with problems by ourselves makes us more satisfied and give us the opportunity to succeed in other aspects of live while I concede that it can be always be practical to talk to people who overcome such situations.

First, dealing with problems in person makes people fulfill their potential. The ability of a person to solve problems is a key determinant in the general success level of him or her. Therefore, people should not escape problems, since solving problems is a way of expanding knowledge and discipline. For instance, human-beings are the slowest mammals in terms of child development; many scientists consider this as an indication of the people's need to prosper and develop adequately. That means people should fight even from birth to be able to live at least a decent life. As seen, struggle is an undeniable part of human life, hence, people should follow the track of their instincts and fight with problems.

Furthermore, challenging situations make people successful in other aspects of their lives. Is there any person who became successful without fights, struggles or conflicts? Did Abraham Lincoln become the person we know all of a sudden? Did he fight or just wait for a miracle to happen? The answer is; as well known, he had a long and tortuous fight with the problems surrounding him. He acknowledged that life was normal with problems, and what needed to be done was to overcome this obstacles; not to give up. Never quitting once, although he had the chance, his perception of life made him the person that all of us read in books today. The problems he dealt with made him learn to live, fulfil his potential and be successful in not only as a politician but also as a good person and an image as a whole. As seen, if one wants to be successful in life, he or she has to know how to confront and then overcome them.

However, it also a fact that it is always a good idea to refrain spending time with tiring and exhaustive problems while one can easily consult another person who had already dealt with it, and spend their times with other realities of life. Studies show that people can be happier when they interact with other people while solving problems, and spend a more positive life. Many people aim to live a happy life, and problems in this sense constitute an obstacle. What relieves them during these times is to lessen the burden on their shoulders by sharing it with their loved ones. Dealing with such situations with this manner is very logical one, and no-one can deny the contribution of emotional support on people's minds.

Overall, I mostly agree with the prompt, since spending time with solving problems is useful for people, while the opportunity to discuss with other people should always be kept in mind.

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Average: 6.2 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... what needed to be done was to overcome this obstacles; not to give up. Never quitt...
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e was to overcome this obstacles; not to give up. Never quitting once, although h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, at least, for instance, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2443.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 512.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.771484375 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55350982866 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48828125 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0214438844 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.217391304 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2608695652 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34782608696 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133524276885 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474821804095 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045901649516 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078019822862 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290494114169 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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