The climate is changing in almost every country and many of us have experienced this change given the evidence of such change. We all are responsible for this climatic change in some way or the other way. So, it is sagacious for us to reduce consumption of energy and lead a more sustainable lifestyle. There are many ways by which living a sustainable lifestyle in developed nations can reduce consumption on energy.
We all know one of the main reason behind climate change is global warming. Global warming is caused due to increased amount of carbon dioxide , CFCs and HCFs in atmosphere. These compounds not only cause global warming but also ozone layer depletion which is deleterious for human health. To prevent global warming we should plant more and more trees and prevent use of air-conditioners and refrigerators which contain CFCs and HCFs.
Most of the developed countries still use fossil fuels for generation of electricity and other purposes. As we all know that fossil fuels are limited and it requires thousands of years in formation of fossil fuels. We reduce their use as burning fossil fuels causes pollution. There are other alternatives to fossil fuels which can be used like solar energy , wind energy which are renewable and they don't cause pollution.
In conclusion, it can be said on the basis of the above-mentioned points that some people still believe they not live a sustainable lifestyle in developed countries but they are wrong and they are wasting a lot of energy in doing so. Therefore, it is indispensable for individuals living in developed countries to live a sustainable lifestyle so that they can alleviate global climate change.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...uels which can be used like solar energy , wind energy which are renewable and the...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ind energy which are renewable and they dont cause pollution. In conclusion, it...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enewable and they dont cause pollution. In conclusion, it can be said on the bas...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239057239057 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.161616161616 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.13468013468 0.0880659088768 153% => OK
Adverbs: 0.037037037037 0.0497285424764 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0572390572391 0.0444667217837 129% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127946127946 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.037037037037 0.0406280797675 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84766060449 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.016835016835 0.030933414821 54% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0707070707071 0.0997080785238 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016835016835 0.0249443105267 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016835016835 0.0148568991511 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1680.0 2732.02544248 61% => OK
No of words: 280.0 452.878318584 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.58838876751 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357142857143 0.366273622748 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239285714286 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167857142857 0.200843997647 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15 0.132149295362 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84766060449 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 219.290929204 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503571428571 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 49.0454976334 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.380412469 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6244752372 59.4972553346 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 141.124799967 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.380412469 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 43.9285714286 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.57894736842 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437938103327 0.391690518653 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.176104230014 0.123202303941 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.104002283331 0.077325440228 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.56845297896 0.547984918172 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119664078296 0.149214159877 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168248237786 0.161403998019 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102729511039 0.0892212321368 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.214168950999 0.385218514788 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0183935484361 0.0692045440612 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281058639681 0.275328986314 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131558975097 0.0653680567796 201% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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