Some people believe it is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public. Others believe that the public has a right to be fully informed.
In the given statement, it is stated that some people often believe that it is necessary and even desirable for the political leader to withhold information from the public while others believe that it is the right of the people to know everything. Political leaders may have a very sensitive information related to the country which can not be made public because it can create concern at country level or at a international level. These type of information need to be keep covert as it may pose threat to the national security. So, one should always agree with the former belief which supports the withhold of information.
Firstly, there are many reason support the former belief in the point like national security, sensitivity of the information, information that lead to the law and order situation or information that may create panic among public. Also the decision taken by the leaders may be a part of the strategy towards the hegemony of the nation or a strategy towards some country or related to increase the economical condition which if made public may fail the steps taken by the government. So, it is necessary for the people leading the country to keep the information furitive.
Secondly, some information may be of the step taken by government to reduce some problem of the country which can take a long time to give result. But if such information is made public the culprit will get a chance to find a flaw and the plan or purpose for which that task is applied will fail. For example lets take a problem of corruption, if government had decided to take some step regarding the curbing of corruption and if such information is made public by the political leaders then the people involve in corruption will have a chance to find a flaw to get safe and can take some step so that no harm is done to the culprit.
Moreover, some information are of the national benefit and strategy which needs to be kept as a profound secret. Lets take a example of the assaination of terrorist Osama-bin-Laden, if American government had kept this plan open for public then would it have been successful. It may had given terrorist to hide at some other place.
However, there are some information which has high need to be told to public that should not be hide away. These information are those which does not have anything related to national security of the country and also serve as a development characteristic of the country to the people and also as report card of the political people.
In conclusion, it should be considered that there are some information which should be made public but there are some information which should not be made public until desired result is obtained.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n create concern at country level or at a international level. These type of info...
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...e with the former belief which supports the withhold of information. Firstly, there a...
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...upports the withhold of information. Firstly, there are many reason support t...
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...ion that may create panic among public. Also the decision taken by the leaders may b...
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...increase the economical condition which if made public may fail the steps taken by...
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...ry to keep the information furitive. Secondly, some information may be of the...
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...that no harm is done to the culprit. Moreover, some information are of the na...
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...rrorist to hide at some other place. However, there are some information whic...
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...to public that should not be hide away. These information are those which does not have anything ...
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...report card of the political people. In conclusion, it should be considered t...
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...ublic until desired result is obtained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 469.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79530916844 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71545540649 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.394456289979 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 731.7 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9319788725 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5625 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3125 23.4991977007 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360956034539 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133845292356 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12381298782 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205562797606 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093544422061 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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