Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Leadership is a critical topic and always been in discussion. The crystal clear principles and objectives of a leader makes him a good leader. An effective leader has mission and vision for the team, the same apply to political leaders also. It can't be strongly stated that a political leaders have to yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise or an effective leader has to be consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. Sometimes, it totally depend on situation, which a county or state is facing, and a political leader need to act accordingly, he/she can't always get influenced by public opinion or stay committed to his principles, even these are hindering growth of country.
Now days, we are hearing one topic almost everyday in the news, especially in US election campaigns, which is is gay marriages. There are more people who are against then for it. Former US president, Brack Obama understood and analyzed the whole situation and legalized gay marriages. The president didn't act out of majority public opinion and abandon his principles, that he is president of democratic country, which gives right of life, liberty and pursuit of happiness to everyone. On the other side, elected president Donald Trump is willing revoke gay marriages law, as he against it. That is his principles which are leading him to this decision, and if he follows that then he will take away that right of pursuit of happiness from some US citizens.
Another example, The prime minister of India, Narinder Modi, he just banned five hundred and thousand bills in the country and brought country in a crisis mode. He didn't think about public before passing this law, which is now effecting country's economy so badly. This might be his principle not take opionion from public, but public has to face this difficulty in money exchange. On this decision, if he would have given time to public to give their opinion then things would have been different.
Thus, in conclusion, a good leader is who can understand and analyze the need of country when there is need for pubic opinion and to abandon principle for the sake of compromise and when to stay committed to his principles and objectives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'public'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, then, thus, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96533333333 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66899898006 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6247464498 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.375 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26981655195 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907980032597 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108908763067 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165053329432 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117410213614 0.0667264976115 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.