Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Leadership is a propriety utterly dependent on the quality to make everyone around the person happy and satisfied with the person as well as, the ability to make a proper decision on a every circumstance and being devoted to achieve it. The prompt provides the opinion of some people who wants their leader to address each and every problem and work accordingly to it. It also gives view of other people who prefers obdurate leaders. I mostly agree with the prompt and provide two explanation that emphasizes the public friendly leader as a better one. However, I do concede and provide a few reasons that a leader committed leader to principle is also needed.
Firstly, in countries having multi-party system there are many political parties for election. There is a chance that any political party doesn’t get a majority. In such case the political party that has gained most vote must develop a mutual relation with another party. While doing so, leaders of both the parties must to some case abandon their principles and make an agreement with the other. If the compromise is not strongly founded, they bond breaks and the government falls. Proper relation between these political parties ensures the proper functioning of administration as well as stability in the country.
Moreover, a leader, who is strongly inured and tenacious to his principle, is often a dictator and most people doesn’t want to be ruled by a dictator. He is rigid to his principle but in doing so divest right of his citizens. For example, Hitler, ruler of Germany, was so stubborn to his rule that severe punishment was given to those who break the norms. Even he increased the status of Germany and made it economically and militarily powerful many people were not satisfied. This is because their opinion and feelings were in vain. They could not express freely and at that time the most important thing for them was right to freedom which was desiccated. The principle in a strong manner can always not serve good; flexibility is also a characteristics of a citizen friendly leader.
However, sometimes a far-sighted leader must be stubborn and must work according to the principle for public good which at present seems gruesome. For example, Donald Trump, president of America and one of the principle-based leaders, threatened to deploy military force in street if people didn’t follow social distancing and gather for protest in the time of Corona pandemic. This expression gained a wide disapproval and he was lambasted publicly. But it serves good to the people and controls the virus from spreading. Although, people complained their right to freedom was disturbed, it protects people from getting infected from crowdy situations. So, a leader must sometimes take a strong move and not be nimble for a long-term benefit.
Thus, in conclusion, a leader must have both the quality of addressing the views of his people and also must have rigidity and be strong to his words. These abilities of the leader are based on his decision-making capacity which is a main factor that make him great and superior from others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he ability to make a proper decision on a every circumstance and being devoted to...
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Line 4, column 672, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a strong manner" with adverb for "strong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...dom which was desiccated. The principle in a strong manner can always not serve good; flexibility ...
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Line 4, column 738, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a characteristic' or simply 'characteristics'?
Suggestion: a characteristic; characteristics
...ays not serve good; flexibility is also a characteristics of a citizen friendly leader. However,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2598.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99615384615 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73215295387 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511538461538 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 818.1 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5874282945 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9230769231 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11538461538 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279345310411 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732195879427 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521956291589 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153953044463 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026331746564 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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