Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
While principles and commitment to them are considered a quality of appriciation in ones personality and behavior, most political leaders today fail to indulge it in themselves. This not only makes there public image bad but also makes them an insignificant leader. It is undoubtedly true that a representative with committed principles and lifelong objectives stands at a better position then one who twists them in order to achieve goals of his benefit only.
People today in these difficult times of world’s pandemic need a person with immense caliber working towards humanity and betterment of the society firstly in fields of health. Only a person with set principles can work towards the betterment of people in the best way possible. Instead, someone who would abandon his/her principles to get the work done, might not do it the right way. People with no principles often turn out to do wrong doings which might be illegal. Achievement achieved the wrong way hold no significance at all.
There were leaders and will be in future who do listen to the public opinion do what benefits the people he is leading and still hold on to their principles. These people keep mankind happy for generations and keep politics out of dirt. A living example being Ex-president of USA Mr. Barack Obama. His decisions, his nature and principles always benefits people around him and under his representation and guidance.
Truthfully, I believe that people with a tendency to let go principles are not cogent of their true self and rife with holes of uncertainty and lack in consciousness.
It is still believed and holds ground that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. This indeed must be a political leaders’ first and foremost quality determined by people before electing the right candidate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14838709677 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89331642182 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1707870199 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30600096373 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962728994337 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100321624596 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177068175746 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137979239025 0.0667264976115 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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