Some people believe that in order to thrive, a society must put its own overall success before the well-being of its individual citizens. Others believe that the well-being of a society can only be measured by the general welfare of all its people.
In order for people to get along with other people certain rules and regulations had to be put into place. For example rules like the “right to free speech” or not to rob others’ belongings form fundamental goals of the society that governs its citizens. In current times almost everyone exists within some society, but the problem becomes much more complex when analyzing groups at massive scales. satisfying and arriving at agreements within tens of people seems reasonable and straightforward. however, in cases like the United States of America, today’s societies must strike a balance between hundreds of millions of people.
A relationship between the welfare of a society and the welfare of its people ultimately depends on the goals that the individuals place on their society. some people believe that a society is built to serve its inhabitants; at which point it seems only fair to measure its effectiveness by the satisfaction of the people who it is supposed to support. other people claim that the society exists to protect the people it governs irrespective of their own desires; thus, the success of a society is based off of how it accomplishes its fundamental purpose irrespective of the demands of the people. because the goals of a society affect how its success is measured I will assume that the goal of a society is to protect and enable its people, as this is the goal of the society I live in.
In a society which prioritizes protection of its people many a times there is conflict between individual desire and safety of individuals. For example, consider the restriction of the distribution of firearms to individuals in societies. On one hand the inhabitants desire to own weapons is a measure of individual well-being and liberty. On the other hand to better protect its inhabitants the society would need to restrict and infringe upon the well-being and desires of its individuals. because the goal of the society is to prioritize protection, this is a case where I would consider that the success of the society is independent of the well-being and comfort of its inhabitants.
General happiness of a society’s inhabitants is not ignored under the goal of protection and enablement. Even if the society prioritizes these two goals then enablement of people directly relates to their well-being. this allows the construction of the contrapositive if an individual is not doing well then the society is not giving them the liberty to succeed. In order to gauge how well a society accomplished its goal of individual enablement it must consider the general happiness of the population. however, this is only because the society’s goals in this this align with the goals of its people.
Therefore, I believe that the society’s success is different than the success of its individuals. but if the goals of the include the success of the individuals, in order to measure the effectiveness of a society satisfying its goals one would have to look at the satisfaction of the inhabitants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Satisfying
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2567.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 503.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10337972167 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1118496257 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403578528827 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 816.3 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4572504707 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.238095238 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9523809524 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476268847928 0.243740707755 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158450906318 0.0831039109588 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857591713308 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279929061781 0.150359130593 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779996439122 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.