Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented
Science has revolutionized our thinking, our knowledge and the way we interact with the world and with our fellow human beings. The prompt suggests that some people consider that scientific discoveries have given us a better understanding of the world around us, yet other people consider that these discoveries have revealed that this world was greatly complex. I strongly agree with the former notion that science has paved the way for a better comprehension of our universe and our system for the following three reasons.
To begin with, our lives are currently interdependent on technology and what these scientific developments have offered us in the last few decades. For instance, most people start their days by commuting using transportation methods that depend on what were created in the 20th century like the car, the train or the metro. Moreover, most people conduct their work using a computer that depends on microchips which was created using scientific innovation and communicate withg one another using iphones across the globe. All these trechnological devices that are at the core of our day to day lives would not have been possible if it were not for the scientic discoveries and innovations that were conducted deligently in the past fifty years. Moreover, in the current epidemic of the covid-19 which is putting the education of millions of students at stake, if it wasn’t for the creation of the internet, the computer and this global network the future of these students would have been terminated.
Furthermore, scientific research and development is not a recent thing and has been the core of human interest for thousands of years. For instance, if we inspect the drawings of Leonardo Da Vinci we can clearly see his interest in scientific development and engineering. His passion for human enhancement and his drive to create new and innovate structures. This aspect was clearly translated in the dramatric life of Galileo Galilei who sacrificed his life for his scientific drive. He was passionate about his discoveries and preferred to die than to claim other than his beliefs. It was people such as Galilio that have paved the way for the discovery of the moon. He set the first step, and scientists continued untill the moon has become a simple touristuc visit for some .This clearly shows that though we are bound to face complex issues along this scientific drive but this process is crucial and necessary.
Moreover, scientific research has started also with our ancestors in a very important field and will persist till the end time and that is, Medicine. The creation of Penicilline was a crucial and turning point in that field, and it has ever since saved miliions of lives. If it was not for scientific discoveries and endless research, such a medication would not have been possible, and humanity would have been still at the risk of infection. Another scientific breakthrough in that field is the creation of the polio vaccine which has saved millions of children around the globe and saved their future which would have crippled their lives. To make my point clearer, we are now at the mercy of scientific innovation to save us from the epidimic of Covid 19 which has impaired our lives, brought death to our communities and sent the whole world into oblivion!
True, science can and do unravel surpring issues, and as humanity was face complex situations that we consider beyond our scope. However, the balance between the benefits of its virtues and vices is way more towards its virtues.
Finall, I believe in science and in its development and as a scientific person I believe in this drive and I consider that humanity at large will benefit from the development of science at large….
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: .
...become a simple touristuc visit for some .This clearly shows that though we are bo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...come a simple touristuc visit for some .This clearly shows that though we are bound ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 33.0505617978 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3122.0 2235.4752809 140% => OK
No of words: 624.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00320512821 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99799879888 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71505765144 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 954.0 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.464117538 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.909090909 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256260965542 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720630934698 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931497081553 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131993927702 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834942605163 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 100.480337079 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e his interest in scientific development and engineering. His passion for human e...
^^
Line 3, column 779, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...become a simple touristuc visit for some .This clearly shows that though we are bo...
^^
Line 3, column 781, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...come a simple touristuc visit for some .This clearly shows that though we are bound ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 33.0505617978 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3122.0 2235.4752809 140% => OK
No of words: 624.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00320512821 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99799879888 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71505765144 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 954.0 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.464117538 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.909090909 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256260965542 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720630934698 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931497081553 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131993927702 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834942605163 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 100.480337079 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.