Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species despite the expense to humans in effort time and financial well being Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts especially at a great cost in money an | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species, despite the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well-being. Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.

Human beings as now stand in the better position than thousands or hundreds of year ago. All these are achieved in the expense of flora and fauna destroying the ecosystem in which thousands of plants and animals are in the position of extinction or some of them are already extinct. Human beings are encroaching inside their ecosystem and letting the environment adverse enough to make them survive. Thus, I believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species whose exploitation directly or indirectly affect human daily ways of life.

Foremost part is that we human are exploring new ideas and innovation, thus making our life easier and convenient on the one hand; whereas, our advancement letting flora and fauna to limit in their space and finally lead to extinction. For instance, the scientists are gaining tremendous success in the field of mobile network with the aim of flourishing communication all over the world in an effective manner whereas with the rapid advancement in 3G, 4G and 5G in today’s market has let many birds in the state of exploitation or some of the birds are already extinction due to the resonance of mobile networks. Thus, society should try to save plants and animals with the expense to human in effort, time and financial well-being.

Secondly, plants and animals exists in the natural ecosystem with the role of symbiotic relationship between each other. The presence of one’s animals or plants directly correlate with the presence of other’s animals and plants respectively. For example, with the evolution of human kind in millions of year ago, people depended upon agriculture as well as hunting to live their life. Bees as well as insects play a vital role in pollinating crops. If the bees or pollinating insects are in the state of extinction, then human beings are deprived of food which is an essence basic needs of life. The plants generally produce food with the help of photosynthesis process; during this process, the plant utilizes carbon dioxide and produces oxygen a vital gas for breathing for whole animals including human. The plants utilize carbon dioxide limiting their presence necessitate for limiting increasing in temperature. On the other hand, there are other medical advantages too which are directly related to honey produces by bees for treating many diseases like coughing, worm heals as well as digestion.

Thirdly, the food chain in ecology is the phenomenon of transferring energy and matter in the form of food from one organism to another. For example, the plants utilize carbon dioxide and make food through the process of photosynthesis. These plants are consumed by herbivorous animals and these herbivorous animals are again consumed by carnivorous animals. Again, these carnivorous animals are feed by scavenger and the dead of carnivorous animals. The excreta and remaining of these dead animals are utilized by the plants to flourish which completes a cycle. Thus, each species is inter related with another one. If the life cycle of one species is disturbed, then the whole ecosystem is definitely disturbed resulting into adverse condition for the human beings to habituate.

However, there are certain conditions in which existence of one species has not affect the ecosystem in whole. Exemplifying the period of dinosaurs, the large behemoth of terrestrial animals of that Mesozoic era, in which they became extinct near about sixty-six million year ago. The food sources at that time was scarce due to their large seized body and hardly fed by other animals. Due to environment change resulting from volcano eruption as well as impacting of celestial bodies, the dinosaurs became extinct. After then, the foods source was plentiful for other animals to fed and survive. There are no other consequences of extinction of dinosaurs in the ecosystem. Similarly, there are natural calamities like landslide, flood, volcano eruptions which are beyond the limit of human kinds and the destruction caused by these calamities lead to damage of large proportions of livestock and animals which are uncontrolled from human acts. Again, there might be the situation in which the current problems of human kind measures more than preserving animals as well as plants. The pandemic caused by COVID 19 has killed lakhs of people all around the globes and a large capital is utilized to manufacture vaccines as well as to run vaccine drive. Thus, the whole world is concerned to save the human beings from this contagious disease rather than to save endanger species.

In conclusion, there is a necessitate to save endanger species which have been in the process of extinction due to the activity of human beings at any cost to balance the ecosystem. However, it is unjustifiable to utilize large sum of money to save endanger species whose presence has negligible impacts in conserving the ecosystem of the planet.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective manner" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ishing communication all over the world in an effective manner whereas with the rapid advancement in 3...
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Line 7, column 586, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'interred'.
Suggestion: interred
...ompletes a cycle. Thus, each species is inter related with another one. If the life c...
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Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
... which existence of one species has not affect the ecosystem in whole. Exemplifying th...
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Line 11, column 25, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ger species. In conclusion, there is a necessitate to save endanger species which have bee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, whereas, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 131.0 58.6224719101 223% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4125.0 2235.4752809 185% => OK
No of words: 801.0 442.535393258 181% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14981273408 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.31995708593 4.55969084622 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73096864633 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 346.0 215.323595506 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431960049938 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1323.9 704.065955056 188% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.181451189 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.323529412 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5588235294 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285092022567 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722933497083 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801611026153 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150573700523 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489977410168 0.0667264976115 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 192.0 100.480337079 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments