Claim: While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self-satisfaction, it should really be a source of embarrassment.
Reason: Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Self-satisfaction may bring boredom in a human life, but boredom may not always arise due to lack of imagination and self-motivation. Self-satisfaction arises due to complacent in his activities, ideas, imagination and planning. I mostly agree with the given topic as self-satisfaction somehow leads to boredom due to lack of changes in his routine activities or novice ideas which may be the cause of embarrassment; but, boredom may not always arise due to lack of imagination and self-motivation.
Firstly, a children’s mind is full of eagerness and curiosity of learning new things. They try to copy from his elders and their parents to learn new ideas and solutions what the problem they face in his naivety life. Some may interest in mathematical problems and science discoveries whereas some may interest in drawing and social activities. For instance- A child gets difficulty to solve mathematical problems although he tries harder and harder whereas he has great interest in depict portrait images of human beings. This child may feel bask while solving the problems of mathematics which brings boredom although he tries harder by learning formulas, assisting help from seniors and self-motivation of learning math problems but due to lack his ability to solve mathematical problems may bring him discomfit in his classroom.
Secondly, some industries spend large sum of money in research and development to bring changes in his products to satisfy the needs of customer whereas some industries satisfy with the initial products or sales of his original products. For instance, Samsung, a mobile company spend huge amount of money in research and development to bring better product each year so that they could feed the emerging need of his customer, however, Nokia company, which once was the best producer and distributor of mobile devices has in the stage of shuttering down due to lack its ability to change the product according to the demand of customers. Similarly, ambassador cars, once was the leading manufacturing company in India. Due to its simple design and lack of changeability in its products, the company now became obsolete whereas Hyundai, Suzuki, Honda due to their variability in products and changing features all around the year, they have dominated the automobile industries by fulfilling the demand of every group of people by providing economical range to luxurious cars. Thus, lack of imagination brings complacent in its products which results in depletion of its products too.
Thirdly, people starts his career with great enthusiasm and potential to fulfill the objectives of organization and ultimately the goals of the organization. Due to his routine works, his efficiency decreases gradually resulting in unable to fulfill the demands of organization. He/she feels complacent in his work due to tedious or monotonous in his job. Thus, routine behavior in working environment may bring boredom in his/her life. These employees may be motivated by providing training or promoting to the next level of organization providing new responsibility which may force him to think or imagination of his new position. Thus, boredom arises due to routine behavior in his working areas which may result in lack of imagination and self-motivation.
In conclusion, self-satisfaction may bring boredom in his life due to stagnant of activities which results due to lack of imagination or self-motivation; but, this condition is not always true as mental ability of learning may bring complacent in his activities although trying harder to grab the knowledge or imagination.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 834, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y bring him discomfit in his classroom. Secondly, some industries spend large su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 98.0 58.6224719101 167% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3048.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 569.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35676625659 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88402711743 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16695665234 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446397188049 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 945.9 704.065955056 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.2590835496 60.3974514979 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.4 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.45 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194828351061 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767266014585 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914610208813 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140408375475 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095920045616 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 834, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y bring him discomfit in his classroom. Secondly, some industries spend large su...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 98.0 58.6224719101 167% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3048.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 569.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35676625659 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88402711743 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16695665234 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446397188049 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 945.9 704.065955056 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.2590835496 60.3974514979 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.4 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.45 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194828351061 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767266014585 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914610208813 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140408375475 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095920045616 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.