Some people believe that success in creative fields, such as painting, fiction writing, and
filmmaking, primarily requires hard work and perseverance. Others believe that such
success mainly requires innate talents that cannot be learned.
Innate talent is a must for success in creative fields; mere hard work and pereseverance cannot buy success for those who are without such byborn talents.
Hard work and perseverence is the other name of success; without those no one has succeed. However, success in creative fields such as painting, fiction writing and filmmaking requires innate talents, only hard work and perseverance are not enough. For example, Kazi Nazrul Islam, National Poet Of Bangladesh, was, though an illiterate person, prolific in terms of poems and short stories. He wrote his first poem at the age of ten, worked at a store at that time, and for this he didn't need to work hard and recieve formal education. By born talent Nazrul wrote many songs along side short stories and most of them were on struggle of human life. Ecnomically poor Nazrul joined army at the age of seventeen and during his time in army he wrote his famous poem ''Bidrohi''; but for writing such a great poem he never studied and practiced days after days. It was that which is called God gifted.
Similary, Rabindronath Thagore, Noble prize winner in literature in 1913 for ''Gitanjoli'', wrote his first poem at the age of eight and he never attended school and earned any degree in literature during his enitre life. But he was so prolific that poets and writes of modern life follow him in order to become great poet like him. Though he never attendent any school, his poems and short stories are taught in school level and in university level students who study in language read his poems and short stories as well as novels. Anything he had written was similarly marvelous and earned exaltation from writers from all of the world. He wrote his famous poem ''Shonar tori'' while he was on a boat, enjoying the bucolic beauty of Bangladesh. For becoming a great poet of all time he did not require hard work and pereseverance. If hard work and perseverance could make a person great poet like him, all of the students who study his poems days and nights and earn knowledge about how to write a nice poem would become a Rabindronath like him, but it never happened.
Zoynal Abedin a famous painter of Bangladesh showed his early brilliance in his field when he was a child, without any formal knowledge of painting and drew many well known picture in his enire life. For becoming such a famous painter he didn't require to work diligently, rather painting came from him innate talent. There are thousands of art school in the world today where todays novice artist learn the basic about painting but we never get thousands of Picaso or Zoynal Abedin and it cannot be attirbuted to their lack of hard work and perseverance, rather most of them try day and night to emulate Picaso or Zoynal Abedin.
Though, it is true that having innate talent doen not mean one will be successful in creative field, one never become successful with hard work without innate talent.
Innate talent is a must for success in creative field
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...me of success; without those no one has succeed. However, success in creative fields su...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...t a store at that time, and for this he didnt need to work hard and recieve formal ed...
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Message: Did you mean 'alongside'?
Suggestion: alongside
... By born talent Nazrul wrote many songs along side short stories and most of them were on ...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...and earned exaltation from writers from all of the world. He wrote his famous poem Shonar ...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ould make a person great poet like him, all of the students who study his poems days and n...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, similarly, so, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2470.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.382939858 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7518339509 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177399015728 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745684841251 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898679075964 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147248730939 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655720006164 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.