Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.
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Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented above.
The lifelong debate regarding weather the foundation of education should moral or logical is a very vital one. The idealogy of any society highly depends on the foundation of their education. A moral society is always an ideal one but a logical society is much more developing. The prompt claims that some people are in favour of a moral society and the foundation of the education should be morality while the rest feel opposed to it. I mostly support the the belief that the foundation of education should be more inclined towards logical reasoning rather than morality because of the following 2 reasons.
Firstly, in my opinion a society has logical reasoning as the foundation of their education are much more progressed in comparision to the morality. If a society which works on the logical reasoning always sees a exponential growth. For example, in a society that follows logical reasoning the criminal system will be equitable. The first step for an investigation would be to look at clues and chronologically follow them that leads them to the criminal instead of accusing someone just because they are morally wrong and doesn't have public support, elucidating such a situation requires radical thinking and it precludes the society from exonerating the wrong person.
Secondly, having a moral society is not as bad as it seems sometimes it has merit over the logical society. For examlple, if while electing a candidate for an authorative post in the society we look only at the logical reasoning of the candidate instead of the morals and principles then there can be a conflict with the decisions taken by him or her. If the person who's foundation of education is morality will definitely do better at an authorative position in such a society in comparision to the other discussed previously.
In conclusion, a society's foundation of education highly molds the kind of people in the society so instead of having a moral society a logical reasoning society should be promoted more.
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...gressed in comparision to the morality. If a society which works on the logical re...
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...with the decisions taken by him or her. If the person whos foundation of education...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02102102102 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84796166766 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483483483483 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.8881445403 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.615384615 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 5.21951772744 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39295053671 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169223834531 0.0831039109588 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745175151928 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272346721886 0.150359130593 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742028451471 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.