Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.
In today's modern era, as the day passes, people are becoming more and more selfish and greedy and they want to exploit every available sources in order to satisfy their need. Therefore, today morality is in the question as human beings have become heartless. The statement contends that according to belief of some people, morality should be the cornerstone of education whereas some extend their opinion that educating about the logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society. I firmly believe that teaching morality should be given more priority over teaching of logical reasoning.
To begin with, the chief reason of my inclination towards teaching morality lies in the fact that morality means beliefs about right behavior and wrong behavior and therefore if students are taught about the moral lessons from an early age then only they would value other people around them. For example, today we see mankind exploiting the natural resources for their own benefit and this way they harm our mother nature. There has to be a balance otherwise it would surely have adverse effects on earth.
Secondly, teaching morality would be a great idea because it teaches others to maintain their ethics and it would make others realize that they should work according to rules and regulations and they must remain within their boundaries. Ultimately this would help in being a responsible citizen for the country.
Finally, learning morality at an early age would be a great idea because it helps people in realizing the right and wrong and therefore from an early age people would know their limits and that can help in reducing the crime rate which is the prime problems for many countries.
However, one cannot neglect the fact that logical reasoning has its own way to form a prudent personality of humans.
In my final analysis, I conclude that from an individual perspective, logical reasoning may sound a good idea but if we talk about the whole human race then teaching morality would be the best idea as it helps in a long run and it has its own role to play in order to preserve the earth as well as to maintain peace within people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, as to, for example, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9043715847 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40260273981 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530054644809 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8041934584 60.3974514979 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.583333333 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 5.21951772744 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393616298551 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146959243862 0.0831039109588 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118966312818 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187298126932 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123350494925 0.0667264976115 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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