Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society
Practicing morality is hard but necessary. Instincts formed as a result of years of evolution have put
human beings in a position to take actions without giving heed to the process of how the actions are taken.
Morality is a strong differentiator that can be taught to and developed among human beings which separates them
from the behaviors of other living organisms including dinosaurs, a trait that has helped to build strong and long-lasting societies. Doing what someone wants in adversity to save oneself only through logical reasoning could be catastrophic unless the person is able to differentiate between an emotional whim from a logically constructed reason to have taken a particular course of action. While it is very logical to copy answers from a fellow student in an examination, it is not morally right to do so. Notice how someone needs to know whether to copy in the first place, which requires sound logical reasoning to achieve what one wants - maximum marks.Maximum marks achieved without paying heed to how it has been achieved doesn't ensure long-term success.
Logical reasoning is an essential step in a decision-making process but it doesn't ensure a moral society is formed and maintained. Even if a society were to be built with processes that ensure it's survival, some of them which may include killing fellow human beings for food, clothing, and shelter are nothing short of deleterious to the society. On the contrary, having only moral principles without logically reasoning the decision-making process of any course of action stagnates the progress of a society. But the advantages of prioritizing morality has its advantages in that even if it doesn't bring in swathes of people into a society, it ensures that the resources required for building a society doesn't deplete. Morality acts as a set of speed breakers and signboards, based on which logical reasoning has to drive the progress of a society to ensure its sustenance.
Thus, teaching morality should be the foundation of education which is then prioritized and practiced to ensure that a moral society can be built based on sound logical reasoning of the decision making processes to build and sustain a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, thus, while, as to, as a result, on the contrary, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12154696133 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89450806895 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505524861878 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.454872416 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.5 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.21951772744 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27287613424 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110235401672 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717682355075 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136084935665 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950286725892 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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