Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.
The issue is whether or not Some folk believe that teaching ethics should be the foundation of education. Others think that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more produce a moral society. I strongly concur that teaching morality should be the foundation of education, and behind this agreement, my following reasons mentioned below:
Firstly, ethics is a vital part of society, so it entail to teaching morality. To judge a people or thing people should have a morality. This means People should know about difference between right and wrong. For instance, two person is claim each other after that you have to take decisions and stop them and say which is true and counterfeit.
Secondly, School value is also represented by it pupils ethics, So foundation of education should teach morality to their students for school value purpose. This mean people ethics or its behaviors is represent by it school. It is school accountable to teach a morality to their pupils and make a moral society. Because small age children don't know about morality they are study in school.
In the whole, The original statement is veracity. Teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Because Person ethics or behavior is represent his school value.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue is whether or not Some folk believe that teaching ethics ...
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Message: Did you mean 'entails'?
Suggestion: entails
...thics is a vital part of society, so it entail to teaching morality. To judge a people...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...ween right and wrong. For instance, two person is claim each other after that you have...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'represented'.
Suggestion: represented
... mean people ethics or its behaviors is represent by it school. It is school accountable ...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... their pupils and make a moral society. Because small age children dont know about mora...
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Suggestion: don't
...ral society. Because small age children dont know about morality they are study in s...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'represented'.
Suggestion: represented
...n. Because Person ethics or behavior is represent his school value.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 58.6224719101 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 2235.4752809 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 207.0 442.535393258 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14492753623 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64553519149 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 215.323595506 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 704.065955056 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3512787199 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9230769231 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.536401671735 0.243740707755 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201276105628 0.0831039109588 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.207590124924 0.0758088955206 274% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328422143023 0.150359130593 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.229538728349 0.0667264976115 344% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 100.480337079 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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