Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented above.
logical reasoning and moral reasoning both comprise the nature of the human beings and it should be duly noted that the concepts and foundations of morality and that of the logical reasoning are not mutually exclusive of one another. Therefore it is of prime importance that the education system designed should balance both these aspects and impart the education of both these fields in desirable quantities.
If we consider a person who has been imparted a great deal of academic knowledge in some particular field and in during this process he has been only taught a modicum of ethics and morality. then he might get himself established at a very reputed career but it can be suggested that he might end up being a boor or an indecent person. In such a case he will never be able to serve the society to the fullest with such indifference. His mindset might become self-centered due to a lack of moral instincts. such a person might even end up using his or her knowledge in inappropriate ways just gain his own benefits.Unless the person is given the value education by sole means of logical reasoning he cannot probably produce a moral society.
However, if we tally this above-mentioned person with someone who has been given a generous knowledge about the morality and the ethics to be followed in the society will certainly end up being a very good human being who will be responsible towards the society. he might be honest and nurture all the good instincts desirable in a human being. it is obvious that in our way of life we have to take a lot of decisions every now and then which involves efficient logical reasoning to arrive at the optimum solution. In such a case a person with lower skills of effective reasoning is prone to taking the wrong decisions at several steps and might end up failing in several aspects of life. he might get cheated in several instances or people might take undue advantages of that person. What good will be that moral values without these skills which cannot assure a person a decent lifestyle?
Therefore it is essential to maintain a balanced education system in which the person is imparted with the knowledge of moral values that ensures that he will respect the morality in the society and cultivate philanthropism and benevolence in his character and at the same time the person should be skilled enough to think logically in every aspect of life so that he remains conscious and aware of the things happening in and around him, the prospects of the decisions that he takes on in his life, the careers to pursue, etc. such a person can only contribute efficiently to the society's development and wholesome welfare.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Logical
logical reasoning and moral reasoning both comp...
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... not mutually exclusive of one another. Therefore it is of prime importance that the educ...
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...tered due to a lack of moral instincts. such a person might even end up using his or...
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Suggestion: Unless
...opriate ways just gain his own benefits.Unless the person is given the value education...
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...opriate ways just gain his own benefits.Unless the person is given the value education...
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...re a person a decent lifestyle? Therefore it is essential to maintain a balanced ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80172413793 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.703159312 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456896551724 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.35558688 60.3974514979 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.533333333 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9333333333 23.4991977007 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159607291506 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599169713586 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604317790242 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113577872466 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388305847342 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.