Some people claim that you can tell whether a nation is great by looking at the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientist. Others argue that the surest indicator of a great nation is , in fact, the general welfare of all its people.
Some people argue that the greatness of the nation can be decided by the achievements of its leaders,artists and scientists. However, this is is an overly simplistic view. . The statement also talk about achievements of rulers or leaders of the country and what is the achievements of its rulers? A achievements of its leaders can be determined by the general welfare of all its people. scientists' and artists' achievements and welfare of people is also related. Thus, according to me, achievements of rulers, artists or scientists and general welfare of public cannot be separated. Thus, according to me, to determine a nation is great or not one should consider the general welfare of all its people because scientists and artists are also a part of general public.
Lets first consider the rulers of the nation. Whether a nation is democratic or not, the rulers or leaders of the nations are responsible for general welfare of its public. It is their duty to fulfill the demands of its people and provide basic facilities such as shelter, food, clothes and education. Thus, a leader is said to be accomplished only if he/she is succeed to cater the demands of its people. Thus, the welfare of general public and achievements of leaders cannot be segregated. How a leader can be considered successful even its majority people has to sleep hungry?
Now, if you consider the achievements of scientists and artists. Though, many scientists and artists are self motivated, they cannot contribute to a great extends to its country if they have not sufficient financial help. For example, scientists can make progress in various scientific theories but they cannot contribute in field of space technology because lack of financial help. Another point which is worth consider is that if its general public cannot afford higher education then country cannot produce a great number of scientists.
There are various for of art such as music, dance, painting, and many more. The artists need to be financially sound if they want to achieve great success in addition to their skills. For example, a music composer can create musical masterpiece only through inner inspiration,but for commercial success he must need a financial help. And anther thing to consider is, if the large portion of people cannot satisfy their basic need then they cannot have enough money to praise artistic masterpiece. Thus, achievements of scientists and artists should not consider separate from welfare of general public.
In conclusion, it is not prudent to segregate the accomplishments of its rulers, artists or scientists from the general welfare of all its people. They both are interrelated. Thus, the greatness of a nation can be determined by looking at the achievements of its leaders, scientists and artists as well as by considering the general welfare of its people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2404.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 467.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.147751606 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92532214966 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.400428265525 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 734.4 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4421300125 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.16 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.68 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404815941909 0.243740707755 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138834488856 0.0831039109588 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119053839288 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265207212487 0.150359130593 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137094597036 0.0667264976115 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.