To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The statement contends that one must study major cities of a country to understand the most important characteristics of a society. Some people believe that crucial cultural characteristics remain in the major cities of a country. Yet, they fail to account the importance of culture exists in village and small towns. Thus, one need to study not only its major city but also the villages and sub-urban areas in order to identify important characteristics of any society.
A one should not assume that a society can grow in major towns of a country. Members of any society live not only in large cities but they also found in small towns and villages. And studying only major cities the person cannot get whole picture of a society. It may be possible that members of a society lives in a major cities have different beliefs and life style even though they share a common root of a same society.
A society's important characteristics can be identified by studying its people, arts, music, dance, architectures, etc. And in major city, the people of a society may have shifted from its cultural identification. For instance, people lives in village still preserve their cultural identification through folk dance and music. Architectures of their houses still identifies their culture. On the other hand, in major cities people may have forgotten their arts and music that at one time their identification and move toward international arts and music.
In major cities, people belong to different societies lives in harmony, thus they may have influence over each other. It is a common practice of inter-cast marriages, trades between members different societies, thus consequently they have adopted each other's characteristics. Thus, by studying its major city, a person is able to identify cultural shift in their culture over a period of time.
In conclusion, characteristics of any society can be identified by studying its major cities and villages. Because, members of society lives in villages are more likely to maintain their typical characteristics, whether by studying major cities a person can get cultural shift in a society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... cultural shift in their culture over a period of time. In conclusion, characteristics of...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on can get cultural shift in a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, still, thus, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18103448276 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99960774949 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445402298851 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4900482731 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345057763693 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129785604327 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142661645761 0.0758088955206 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210491574456 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140943538489 0.0667264976115 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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