Sports stars and movie stars have an obligation to behave as role models for the young people who look up to them. In return for the millions of dollars that they are paid, we should expect them to fulfill this societal responsibility.
According to speaker, Sports stars and movie stars have an behave as role model for the young people who looks up to them. Further to support this he said that they have to fulfil societal responsibility in return for the millions of dollars that they are paid. Although I am not agree with the whole point, I agree with the speaker.
Firstly, Sports stars and movie stars are influncers for youth as sports and movies are the one of the biggest medium which is the part of pepoles life. Most of the youth like some sports person or movie stars as they have seen them on Television playing excellent game or performing great actiong. As they have been watching them on television or cinemas they like them and at the same time those movie person or sports person also get more and more love from public and it makes them more popular and more recogonized person. Now as we know everthing comes with some cost, So whatever love and recognition they get from youth also comes with some responsibility. To understand this in better way consider the example of Mr. Amitabh Bachhan who is the one of the legend actor of Indian cinema. His Popularity in the youths of india is too massive. In his career once he was advertising maggie which is the nestle product for a long time. And as Maggie is advertised by Amitabh bachhan one of the biggest name of indian cinema most of indian youth started to buy it and it becomes one of the popular product of india among the youth in a short period. But after many years their is case filed against maggie and amitabh bachhan claiming that maggie is not good for health of the young people of india. That is how one of the great controversi begins and Amitabh bachhan leave doing advertising of maggie. Out of all this we have to accept that no matter that maggie was good or bad for health. The thing is every sport person and movie star should keep this things in mind that whatever they are doing or advertising should not influnce youth in wrong way.
Consider another example of M S Dhoni who is one of the legend cricketer of india. As whole world know that MS Dhoni is known as Mr.Cool as he always behave so calm and cool in every match and situation. This affected every youth and even adults that we have to remain calm in every situation that is the how we can take right decision.
On the other hand, These movie stars and sports stars are get paid because of their talent and recognized all over the world or nation because of their own talent and their own strugle of the life. So it should be at some extend their choice to how they want to leave. But when they get paid millions of dollars for advertisement and it is jut because of their influnce at that time their is some societal resposibility.
In conclusion, These stars should fulfil theri societal responsibility as they are geeting this much of amount becaus of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...aker, Sports stars and movie stars have an behave as role model for the young peop...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...aker, Sports stars and movie stars have an behave as role model for the young people who ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
... the young people who looks up to them. Further to support this he said that they have ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...s that they are paid. Although I am not agree with the whole point, I agree with the ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...poles life. Most of the youth like some sports person or movie stars as they have seen...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this movie' or 'those movies'?
Suggestion: this movie; those movies
...mas they like them and at the same time those movie person or sports person also get more a...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...in a short period. But after many years their is case filed against maggie and amitab...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...sport person and movie star should keep this things in mind that whatever they are d...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Cool
...world know that MS Dhoni is known as Mr.Cool as he always behave so calm and cool in...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'behaves'.
Suggestion: behaves
... Dhoni is known as Mr.Cool as he always behave so calm and cool in every match and sit...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
... remain calm in every situation that is the how we can take right decision. On the o...
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Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...le of the life. So it should be at some extend their choice to how they want to leave....
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Line 7, column 384, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... because of their influnce at that time their is some societal resposibility. In c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2371.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 526.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50760456274 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29444998107 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429657794677 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 736.2 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2947723722 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.772727273 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.31818181818 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422210502281 0.243740707755 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119911393836 0.0831039109588 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138353257253 0.0758088955206 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251202696038 0.150359130593 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177001884999 0.0667264976115 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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