Students should always question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing a

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Students should always question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

The research conducted by behavioural scientists in 2004 in Madhya Pradesh, a State in India, concluded that always questioning the teachers led to disobedience in the class and defeated the cardinal purpose of education. The study also highlighted that in the intolerant society such as India, questioning is considered as an opposition to the established order and treated severely by higher authorities of schools. While there is no reservation that always questioning the subjects in a class often leads to make the teacher nervous and anxious and affect the teaching environment of the class, still there are reasons to believe that students should question what they are taught since it provides the opportunity to teachers to prepare well for the forthcoming questions. In the question-answer environment, teachers often work on their skills, subject knowledge and manner of explaining their ideas in order to placate incessant questioning which ultimately enhance the underlying knowledge of a subject.

The first argument that supports the idea of questioning the subjects is that questioning leads to the discovery of ideas. In a class, students have diverse interests and have come from different backgrounds and their way of questioning provides different views to the same thing. The questioning also leads to inculcate the habit of challenging the established theory and finding the gap in the existing studies. A good example of this is the discovery of infinite equation of complex numbers that was discovered by Mr. Ramanujam, the great mathematician of 18th century. His biography revealed that he had a habit of always questioning his mathematics teachers for the proof of the theorems which made his teachers worried. However, his teachers knew that the questions he was raising were genuine and required scrutiny. His life revealed that by incessant questioning of mathematics theories he was able to derive proofs of some of the most complex problems such as infinite series and theory of prime numbers. Therefore, questioning leads to the discovery of new ideas and proofs which guide successive generations to work further.

Further, the final argument that buttresses the idea of questioning is the future of the students that depend on education. By asking questions, students understand the skills, time and diligence required for pursuing a specific subject. Every student does not have a sound financial background and he/she needs to study courses which can provide him/her the opportunity to work and earn early. The field of science and engineering would not be a good option for such a student since these two streams often require four and even more years of study and these fields cost sufficient amount of money. The questioning in this case would provide him/her to match his/her interests and goals with the time and costs involved in the subjects. This can be illustrated by the study that was conducted in 2016 by ASSOCHAM, a NGO in India, to analyse the reason why some students choose commerce or arts over science or engineering. The study concluded that questioning the teachers in classes gave them the idea that field of engineering required four years of study and it also required continuous devotion to which some students were averse to because of their financial background. Hence, questioning the subjects reveals the students which subjects to pursue in their career.

Contrary to the above paragraphs, one idea that argues that questioning is unwarranted is that it leads to chaos and disorder in class. Today, inequality and difference exists everywhere including school education as well. Some schools are treated with high regards while some are considered just fair. In the latter category, teachers are recruited with lenient procedures and teachers are also not from elevated education background. In these schools, questioning the teachers leads to chaos and disorder since they are not well prepared to teach and not well educated to teach but they are the essential element of diverse education system. For instance, the study concluded by Government of Delhi, a federal part of India, concluded that in government-run schools, teachers were selected without being strict adherence to the standards of teaching but it was necessary since these schools catered to the needs of poor sections of the society. Questioning in these schools led 67 per cent of teachers to change their job to a waiter or a cook which led the scarcity of teachers in these school. Hence, questioning leads to undesirable consequences in a country where inequality is widespread.

As can be seen from above paragraphs that while questioning leads to noise and chaos in a situation where there exists a large scale economic differences in the society, questioning also leads to new scientific discovery and provides the direction to students for their future career paths. Therefore, questioning must be encouraged in schools where students are homogeneous in terms of their support and background.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 816, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...that was conducted in 2016 by ASSOCHAM, a NGO in India, to analyse the reason why...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 30.0 11.3162921348 265% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 121.0 58.6224719101 206% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4257.0 2235.4752809 190% => OK
No of words: 802.0 442.535393258 181% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30798004988 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.32161672023 4.55969084622 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89544548897 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 338.0 215.323595506 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42144638404 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1282.5 704.065955056 182% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.947209717 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.9 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7333333333 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148948671661 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450392102187 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306373408816 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939791837796 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289961435536 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 180.0 100.480337079 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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