Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planning

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Success
.... Success is a main goal of human being.Success is not a single word which particularly...
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Suggestion: It
...ly attached with specific group of task.It can be related to any field either busi...
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Suggestion: , study
... be related to any field either business,study or relationship everyone want to be suc...
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Suggestion: In
...tionship everyone want to be successful.In my opinion success comes from hard work...
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Suggestion: I
...anning with taking chance at right time.I discussed my view on this phenomenon he...
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Suggestion: Each
...not a specific steps to achieve success.Each and every fields have their own strateg...
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Suggestion: In
...n strategies or plan to achieve success.In some field like stock market a person m...
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Suggestion: In
...ake risk at right time to be successful.In science research first a person have to...
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... on it. After some experiments he or she will get some result and then come to kn...
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Suggestion: If
...ow that experiment is successful or not.If a person wish to start new business the...
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Suggestion: He
... it with prior planning and carefulness.He or she have to works with some strategi...
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Suggestion: has
...rior planning and carefulness.He or she have to works with some strategies.There are...
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Suggestion: There
... she have to works with some strategies.There are lots of business men who had taken ...
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Line 5, column 743, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Worlds the richest'.
Suggestion: Worlds the richest
...oday with hard work and their planning. Worlds richest man Bil Gets had taken risk to start Mi...
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Suggestion: So
...the era of Linux based Operating system.So it was a risk to launch windows based O...
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Suggestion: Now
... follow them carefully to achieve goals.Now if you think that he or she will start...
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Suggestion:
...ve goals.Now if you think that he or she will start his or her preparation before...
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Suggestion: in the worst
...erous.one may not score good in exam or in worst case one should fail in examination. ...
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Suggestion: Risk
... some field need both risk and planning.Risk taken at right time with planning and c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, then, while, in my opinion, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64030612245 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62034254917 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484693877551 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 23.0359550562 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.272242496 60.3974514979 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 227.375 118.986275619 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 49.0 23.4991977007 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20136975291 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086642764526 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592083046057 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124926258431 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584773659777 0.0667264976115 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 14.1392134831 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.0 12.1743820225 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.52 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 11.2143820225 193% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.