The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general well-being of all its people.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developin

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The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general well-being of all its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

The statements claim that the public well-being is the indicator of the great Nation. I strongly agree with this claim. The well-being of the people indicates the great Nation because the scientific discoveries are not only used in the discovered country, artistic performance are just for entertainng purpose-not for making Nation great, and disaffected people may make Nation ruin.
First, Scientif acheivements are not the indicator of great Nation. The result of scientif discoverirs are used by all the Nation . During this days, people have to surive, they need money and in anyway the discoverirs reached all over the world. Therefore, the discovery become handy to understand for all. So, the great Nation can not be measeured by Scinetific discovery. For instance, if counry A discovers something, it might be available for rest of the countries of the wrold. Scinetific discoveries are not the indicator of great Nation.
Secondly, the number of the Artistics are also not the indicators of great Nation. Artistics are just for entertainment purpose. The Artistic performance is unbiased for all. For example, Haribansa-popular Nepali comedian, his movies are humerous, accessible for all over the wrold. Anybody, who have internet acess can download his movies. Artists are just the Indicaor of country having great power in culture not in all aspect.
Finally, the peoples welfare are the great indicators of great Nation. If the peoples are satisfied with the countries authoriy, the country it self powerful. Like China, disaffected people from Honkgong and boarder to Nepal, demanding sepatate country, preventing the country from becoming number one in economic power in the wrold by subverting government. Some of the budget have to allocate to hinder the plausible rebellion against county by the government of China. So, country couldnot give full attention to development and have to keep eyes in petty issue.
Thouth some people might say great nation indicators are the leading person, thinnking that great rulers command their subordinate in rigth path and moves towards peace and prosperity. But, there are lots of examples where great leaders are born, still the county are in hegemony under others. Either people of this county did not help their government or people are not able to help due to their own problems. In both case the country government is weak. In conculsion, the people welfare is only the only indicator of the great nation and not the acheivements of it’s artist, scientist or leader.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...f discoverirs are used by all the Nation . During this days, people have to surive...
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...irs are used by all the Nation . During this days, people have to surive, they need ...
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...ple have to surive, they need money and in anyway the discoverirs reached all over the wo...
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...ith the countries authoriy, the country it self powerful. Like China, disaffected peopl...
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Suggestion: Some
... in the wrold by subverting government. Some of the budget have to allocate to hinder the p...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'anyway', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.282608695652 0.240241500013 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.141304347826 0.157235817809 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0847826086957 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.05 0.0497285424764 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0217391304348 0.0444667217837 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121739130435 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0347826086957 0.0406280797675 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77158831949 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0195652173913 0.030933414821 63% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.115217391304 0.0997080785238 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0108695652174 0.0249443105267 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00652173913043 0.0148568991511 44% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2538.0 2732.02544248 93% => OK
No of words: 406.0 452.878318584 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.25123152709 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.408866995074 0.366273622748 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.29802955665 0.280924506359 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221674876847 0.200843997647 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.165024630542 0.132149295362 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77158831949 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490147783251 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 53.5414742096 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.6153846154 23.380412469 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0038260996 59.4972553346 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6153846154 141.124799967 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 23.380412469 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.576923076923 0.674092028746 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 45.4183402804 51.4728631049 88% => OK
Elegance: 2.0612244898 1.64882698954 125% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.546218128205 0.391690518653 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.148010441086 0.123202303941 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0879050402616 0.077325440228 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.513555666452 0.547984918172 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153537835331 0.149214159877 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22638684693 0.161403998019 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129452190341 0.0892212321368 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.491083155997 0.385218514788 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.083740192572 0.0692045440612 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.411312786183 0.275328986314 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568289408893 0.0653680567796 87% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.4325221239 163% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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