The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievement of its rulers, artists , or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position you should consider ways in which the statement might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
An indicator is any group of statistical values that taken together give an indication of the health of the economy. Some would argue that the surest indicator of a great nation is shown by the general welfare of its people, but others would state that the indicator to a great nation is demonstrated by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists. In my view, I believe the general health of a country is highly dependent on its ruler, because the decision and achievements of its leaders determine how sound the economy will be.
America is a great nation today because of the kind of leaders they have. Looking back from 1775 the year they got their independence from Britain with George Washington as the first president till the present date. They were opportune to be lead by charismatic leaders who have the interest of the people at heart. With the best managers and administrators, the economy of America has grown to be one of the best in the world. The same thing cannot be said of Libya today. When Gaddafi was the president of Libya, their economy was flourishing, every citizen of Libya was being taken care of, both employed and the unemployed, the old and the young. Every child was given free education from birth, good power supply and best of the amenities was enjoyed by its citizen. Because of his achievement in the country, the economy of Libya was sound and one of the best in Africa. Since the death of Gaddafi the economy of Libya has gone into ruination, different crisis here and there. Civil war, and crime is now commonplace in Libya.
Furthermore, the world leading countries like China, Russia, Japan, United States, these are highly industrialized and technological countries. They have good, scientists, good technologists and engineers which help to drive the country. China as a country today is almost independent of the world, almost everything in the world is produced in China, they have food, they produce cars, planes, phones etc. They are even the first country to develop the famous 5G network. These are things that control the world and obviously one of those things that make a nation great.
Clearly, the influence of a ruler, and scientist in a country cannot be neglected for the welfare of the people and of the country as a whole. When a nation have good leaders things tend to go well, where as countries that lack good leaders are always in recession. Therefore, the success of a nation is dependent on the achievement of its rulers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: whereas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80510440835 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63529783051 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494199535963 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3238134398 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.619047619 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5238095238 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183634820798 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526289910881 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682076487332 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12735302229 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104061214439 0.0667264976115 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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