Education is very important for everyone in today's world. A student learns a myriad of things while getting education. Teachers are called as second parents for the students in the school. I believe really they are, as they teach us everything from the scratch. They should be rewarded for the service they provide. I am partly agree with the above statement which says that teachers salaries should be based on their academic performance of the students. There are several reasons which I am going to discuss in the next paragraphs.
To begin with, children have their own ability and capability how fast they learn the things in the school. If a teacher gives hundred percent effort and works so hard while teaching, it is not his or her mistake if children do not pay attention on that. Some students hear attentively what the teacher is saying, other students enjoy in the class and pays zero attention. These things cannot decide what the teachers salaries should be? Also every student has its own understanding, time to learn the things. For example: If one out of 20 students fails there is no point that school should deduct teacher's salary.
In addition to this, if one might think of doing in that way then every teacher will get demotivated and may think of resigning the job. Instead of doing reduction in salary, the school should opt for some programs for weak students that discuss study plans, pay more attention towards those children. Doing this will really helpful for the teachers as well as for the students. Instead of deciding salaries at the time of evaluating children's performance, Principal or other members should tell teachers what are their weak points of teaching. These things will encourage teachers to improve and think of a new pattern of teaching, result in may be more students like to learns in the class.
Furthermore, sometimes children get bored, they don't like to be in the class, it doesn't mean that teacher is not teaching well and good. Sometimes change in teaching style or pattern brings new joy and stir up children to learns the things. Nobody is perfect in this world, no students is genius, no teacher is perfect. Deciding somebody's pay on other performance is not good, rather we should face to face meet that person, also to know about performance of the teacher one can take feedback from the children in the class. Every students surely have something in mind to change something about the teacher.
To conclude this, I would like to say that everyone has different learning and teaching skills. We cannot decide salaries for teachers on the basis of performance of the students. It can be harmful for both teachers and students. By doing this may be some less working teacher will get benefit of this. So it can be good if students gives feedback.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...r the service they provide. I am partly agree with the above statement which says tha...
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...hings in the school. If a teacher gives hundred percent effort and works so hard while ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e what the teachers salaries should be? Also every student has its own understanding...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'learn'.
Suggestion: learn
... result in may be more students like to learns in the class. Furthermore, sometimes...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ore, sometimes children get bored, they dont like to be in the class, it doesnt mean...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
..., they dont like to be in the class, it doesnt mean that teacher is not teaching well ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, really, second, so, then, well, while, as for, for example, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8734439834 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47301599178 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46887966805 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5599046763 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8928571429 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219831384073 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695920157189 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680920369783 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14295927641 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491472592721 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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