Teaching- is the process in which one person accords valuable information about related topic, as best as possible. Here, the above statement claim teachers should remunerate on the basis of the performance of the students. It is quiet, a bit, inappropriate in my opinion because one's ability to do something does not rely upon another person ability to do something, so I would like to disagree with the above claim, and I will be further describing this topic on upcoming paragraph.
Furthermore, teachers are the education provider and students are the learner, whose ability to perceive the information provided by teachers differ from one another. Let us consider, there are a lot of students in one classroom, and the teacher is teaching them with a great effort and enthusiasm. At that time, he asked a several question to the student of the class about what he have taught right now: as a result, few of them are only able to give a better answer. But, it does not mean that teacher is not paying attention while teaching may be rest of the students are not paying attention, maybe they are busy in their quixotic world. Therefore, it will not be valid to claim that teacher's salary should be based on student performance.
Besides these all, students have different nature, and different mental ability to tackle the impediments. Teachers are only the one who direct them toward right path. Hence, teachers cannot be solely responsible for the bad performance of students in the school because they spend time on their home also. If they did not study well at home and depend only on what they were taught in the school, it will not be sufficient for them to achieve higher grade. For a example, there are two student who are good at class among which one of them spend a lot of time in school and home for study, and another one only depends upon class studies, as a result that one who spend more time on study on both places get higher score. Therefore, due to the perfunctory behavior of student toward study, their study degrades for which we cannot blame teacher.
However, sometimes it is a teacher responsibility to evaluate the seriousness of the student at class, but if he or she fails to do so: consequentially, student will lose their interest on study, but it does not mean teacher are only responsible for this because students also have to realize by themselves the importance of education in their life. Though, sometimes teacher lack attention toward student, they will not stop to do their duty that is to teach.
At last, in a conclusion, the relationship between student performance and the teacher's salary is invalid as claimed above because the performance of student depends on other factors like how much they are interested toward study and their mental ability to understand and tackle the problems as well as their devotion toward their goal and study.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...it, inappropriate in my opinion because ones ability to do something does not rely u...
^^^^
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'several questions'.
Suggestion: several questions
...nd enthusiasm. At that time, he asked a several question to the student of the class about what ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... the student of the class about what he have taught right now: as a result, few of t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...ore, it will not be valid to claim that teachers salary should be based on student perfo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...l because they spend time on their home also. If they did not study well at home and...
^^^^
Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t for them to achieve higher grade. For a example, there are two student who are ...
^
Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'students'?
Suggestion: students
...her grade. For a example, there are two student who are good at class among which one o...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
...her grade. For a example, there are two student who are good at class among which one o...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...hip between student performance and the teachers salary is invalid as claimed above beca...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2413.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 497.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85513078471 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63678388504 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450704225352 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 761.4 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.961741297 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.941176471 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2352941176 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 5.21951772744 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312733976316 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122028249962 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115277938447 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184062761069 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828959409281 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...it, inappropriate in my opinion because ones ability to do something does not rely u...
^^^^
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'several questions'.
Suggestion: several questions
...nd enthusiasm. At that time, he asked a several question to the student of the class about what ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... the student of the class about what he have taught right now: as a result, few of t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...ore, it will not be valid to claim that teachers salary should be based on student perfo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...l because they spend time on their home also. If they did not study well at home and...
^^^^
Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t for them to achieve higher grade. For a example, there are two student who are ...
^
Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'students'?
Suggestion: students
...her grade. For a example, there are two student who are good at class among which one o...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
...her grade. For a example, there are two student who are good at class among which one o...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...hip between student performance and the teachers salary is invalid as claimed above beca...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2413.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 497.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85513078471 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63678388504 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450704225352 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 761.4 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.961741297 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.941176471 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2352941176 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 5.21951772744 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312733976316 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122028249962 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115277938447 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184062761069 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828959409281 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.