Technology creates more problems than it solves, and may threaten or damage the quality of life.
In the today's world technology becomes the essential parts of people life. It provides modern ways to living the life. As technology occurs it change people's the ways of living. Now a day because of numerous technology solved many mysterious problems but as well as it also creates new problems.
For example, in ancient time, our ancestors think that earth is flat but after getting knowledge about solar system and cosmos conclude that earth is not exactly round shape and earth is parts of solar system. But as well as many unsolved question also raised. Now recently able to capture the picture of “Black hole” thanks to Stephen Hawking and other scientist teams because of the technology but many question eventually build about “Black Holes”, what inside it? If anything goes inside it then what happen? Like that. Means technology provide solution of one problem as well create many question.
Now days, Uses of mobile and computer larger. From small children to elder all are whole days used phone and other electronics instruments. It will create an adverse effect in living life it makes our life ephemeral. For example, high internet speed required high frequency, and because of that if will create many dangerous effect on small birds and other livings. Technology makes life easier and more productive but also create some unsolved problems. For example, because of more robot used in industry. It increases the productivity and efficiency of organization but because of an unemployment also increase.
In today world all country becomes super power and developed. So, it create numerous nuclear bomb and missile but used of any of this weapon perform sabotages. In 1945 when use used nuclear weapon on Hiroshima and Nagasaki, massive destruction occurs that place and there living people.
Hence, No doubt that technology solved convoluted problems but it also create a threaten and damage the quality of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rovides modern ways to living the life. As technology occurs it change peoples the...
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Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changes'?
Suggestion: changes
...iving the life. As technology occurs it change peoples the ways of living. Now a day b...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'many questions'.
Suggestion: many questions
...ist teams because of the technology but many question eventually build about 'Black Hole...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'many questions'.
Suggestion: many questions
... solution of one problem as well create many question. Now days, Uses of mobile and computer...
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...comes super power and developed. So, it create numerous nuclear bomb and missile but u...
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Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: OF_ANY_OF[1]
Message: Consider simply using 'of' instead.
Suggestion: of
...erous nuclear bomb and missile but used of any of this weapon perform sabotages. In 1945 ...
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
... solved convoluted problems but it also create a threaten and damage the quality of li...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... convoluted problems but it also create a threaten and damage the quality of life.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hreaten and damage the quality of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, well, for example, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19682539683 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57916922333 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549206349206 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3146333417 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.85 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240941782363 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072618413828 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101378435597 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167461660311 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13863812303 0.0667264976115 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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