Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The world has witnessed a huge stride in the development of technology during the past few decades. The technology has in many cases made our life simpler such as the invention of simple telephones transformend into smart phones and more. The prompt claims that the technology has made our lives more complicated. In my opinion, there might be very few complications arising from the latest developments in technology. However, many complications of our everyday lives are, in my view, solved due to the following discussion.
To begin with, technology has invented the internet; a huge database of shared knowledge across the globe. Before its invention, finding knowlegde about a particular topic was a complicated task. For instance, if a person needed to find information about fixing a problem in his or her car, then visiting a car mechanic was a must. However, with the tremendous amount of information available, with the clicks of buttons on a computer connected to internet, self repair of a minor or even major problems in a car could be rectified. Therefore, with the advent of technologies such as the internet, one can easily fetch relevant information, which was a difficult task for the people before internet. Thus, technology has made life simpler in terms of achieveing knowledge. Additionally, one can learn about various other aspects of knowledge. For instance, if a person is interested in programming but has no tutors available, this interested learner can watch a variety of tutorials on programming and self-learn the subject, which without the inernet technology is not possible. Thus, technology has made the knowledge more accessible to the globe by removing the complications in the past, which were faced before the rise of internet.
Furthermore, the technology has allowed to dwindle the complications of travelling long distances by the invention transportation mades such as cars, trains, aeroplanes, etc. In the past when people used camels or horse carts for transportation, many problems such as food shortage, long hours of travel, etc. were faced. These issues were solved by the technlogy of different mpodes of transportation. Thus, life was complicated for long distance travellers but with new technology. the problems faced in the past are now decreases impressively.
From the above discussion, one can safely say that technology has aimed to simplify our lives and has in fact removed many complications faced by humans in the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ransformend into smart phones and more. The prompt claims that the technology has m...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'dwindling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: dwindling
...Furthermore, the technology has allowed to dwindle the complications of travelling long di...
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Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...nce travellers but with new technology. the problems faced in the past are now decr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in fact, such as, in many cases, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27204030227 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11038963202 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52644836272 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.938608449 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.65 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.85 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17954671567 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541728336484 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530569230003 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120268332245 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460336613018 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.