Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Technology has had a tremendous impact on humankind, no doubt. But has it simplified our lives or made it more complex? Well, I believe in the former, that it has simplified our lives to a great extent as compared to making it complicated.
To begin with, among the numerous examples one can think of where technology has influenced our daily lifestyle, one that instantly comes to mind, especially in the pandemic times, is the online delivery service. With 'no contact' and 'social distancing' precluding us from doing our daily chores, the online delivery service has been a blessing in disguise! One could order from a wide variety of household essentials just by the touch of a finger and ergo! Your list of ordered items is delivered at your doorstep! Thus, the invention of smartphones has led us to a position where we can buy anything on the click of a button in the comfort of our homes. And it has also mitigated our exposure to the virus around!
Another major impact that technology has brought along with it is the ease of communication. Two decades, a single phone call was unaffordable as it was super expensive. As we progressed, until a decade, a few people carried cellphones (only those who could afford it). One would have to think twice before making any international calls as they were billed heavily. However, with the rate at which technology has boomed, nearly every individual today, irrespective of his status in society, is able to afford a mobile phone. He or she can make innumerous calls to anyone he or she likes from around the world! Even better, we can see other as we converse , i.e., video calls have become the norm today! There has never been a simpler mode of communication.
However, irrespective of the ease of life that technological advancements have showered upon us, some might argue that it has complicated our lives nevertheless. Every individual might not be so tech savvy so as to easily adapt to the fast paced changes brought in. For example, transforming to online banking process, might have been a difficult process for the farmers, who are illiterate. They must have had to struggle and find someone who could help them create an account online. But come to think of it, isn't it better that he gets the help from someone rather than stand in line for hours to wait his turn! Today, the banks have provided setups that actually help such individuals in this process.
Hence, in conclusion, I feel, the pros of the advancement in technology are of such essence that they outweigh the cons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
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Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, as to, for example, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79772727273 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71744275809 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570454545455 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.9731890723 60.3974514979 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.176470588 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8823529412 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 5.21951772744 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224123381063 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828532988203 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118430524584 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139359697221 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140505130579 0.0667264976115 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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