Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
In these days, many state-of-art technologies are replacing workers. Some people argue that technology makes our lives easier by doing undesired, monotonous works for us. However, to survive in the fast-changing society, our lives have been actually more complicated because of the technology.
Admittedly, technology made our daily lives easier by providing easier access to information. Especially, one of the most popular online course platforms, Coursera provided the highest quality of university course to unprivileged students around the world. The CEO of the company, Andrew Ng's solid goal of making education accessible to everybody, helped many students to learn without dealing with the complicated administrative process at university. Without the fast-internet and online course platform, people would have a more difficult hard time to access the information they want.
However, Technology has created serious social issue around the world. During World War II, the Franklin Delano Roosevelt has promoted the Manhattan Project, known as one of the most dangerous projects. World best radiologists have secretly gathered in the US and created a powerful nuclear weapon. Because old people didn't aware of the seriousness of the nuclear's seriousness, it was used as a military weapon and power plant which caused many people to die and bear deformed children. Now, the Treaty on the Non-proliferation of Nuclear Weapon has created and many countries are making effort to use nuclear power safely. Nuclear power, once regarded as a new age of energy, has actually caused many problems and scientists are now discovering more safe and efficient energy source. To sum up, technology has created many unexpected problems in our lives.
Lastly, technology has promoted different crimes. Recently, digital currency Bitcoin has been widely replaced to regular currency. However, the anonymous nature of Bitcoin has prompted many drug dealers. Especially, the company Silk Load has been widely spread around the US, and the government could not track down the owner of the company because they were hiding their location using Torr and traded their money with Bitcoin. On top of that, in many fields, intellectual right of online resources and voice phishing made many victims who are ignorant of the current technology. Therefore, technology has been harmful to some.
Therefore, even if the technology made our lives easier, it has also created many issues like nuclear and cyber crimes. Hence, the government should not only promote technology but also make laws to prevent victims of technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...rful nuclear weapon. Because old people didnt aware of the seriousness of the nuclear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2214.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50746268657 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81081759055 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569651741294 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3407727053 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.636363636 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04545454545 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154532460805 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478639580509 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658816425637 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109345365939 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781213884609 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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