"There is only one definition of success-to be able to spend your life in your own way."
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this definition of success? Support your position by using reasons and
examples from your reading, your own experience, or your observation of others.
In the current competition world, the only one thing to defined you is your achievement, your success. Through your incredible invention makes your name, reputation and value in the whole world. Depend on your work and contribution for general welfare to make great nation and change the life style of human being.
We see the history, many great scientists we had because of that innovative idea and able to thinking ability they provide substantial parts to make future better. Those all scientist always do what they think, what their mind wants to do means to be able to spend own life in own way. For example, great scientist Albert Einstein, was provide biggest contribution in the field of motion and theory of special relativity. Because of their success in this field, many highly convoluted problem absolved after discovering Einstein theory. Another example, scientist which provide essential contribution in the field of space is scientist Stephen Hawking. Those study defined the outer space bodies like star, planet and many other celestial elements. Recently we can able to capture the clearest picture of Black Holes by using Hubble Telescope. This all thing possible because of Scientist Mrs. Stephen.
Now a day, World become a more and more social, interact with all the throughout world. That greatest achievement in the field of social media is achieved by Mark Zuckerberg founder of Facebook. Current richest man in the world is Jeff Bezos owner of Amazon. This all people makes your name and reputation thought out the world by getting greatest success. This all think the way, which they want to do without think about is difficult or not? In current time greatest entrepreneur is think some different way and own way, without divert because of another opinion and social condition. Great success is depending what you do for world, what you achieve, what you provide for great welfare of society.
Successful people always think positively and oppose every adverse effect which can able to affect your goal and achievement. Hence, Success is defining from able to spend your life in your own way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...orld, the only one thing to defined you is your achievement, your success. Through...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...e, great scientist Albert Einstein, was provide biggest contribution in the field of mo...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the biggest'.
Suggestion: provide the biggest
...e, great scientist Albert Einstein, was provide biggest contribution in the field of motion and...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'getting the greatest'.
Suggestion: getting the greatest
...and reputation thought out the world by getting greatest success. This all think the way, which ...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...n current time greatest entrepreneur is think some different way and own way, without...
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Line 5, column 602, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ion and social condition. Great success is depending what you do for world, what you achieve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.111747851 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49768326411 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532951289398 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3694899458 60.3974514979 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.2 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55 5.21951772744 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317829895043 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103869217627 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129271198046 0.0758088955206 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245024585397 0.150359130593 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126969613513 0.0667264976115 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.