Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Every person in this world has different perceptive and ideas. But, they have been mocked for thinking in another direction. Each one of us is right in our own way, but what this society needs is to give a chance to express our thought. Those who have big idea, has been criticize or rejected for few drawback and illogical concept. But, after facing such harsh reality, those who passed through it, is the only one who lend to leave a lasting legacy. Therefore, I agree with the statement that those who stand through their idea after facing criticism and negative feedback, are the only one who make it at the end.
In the world of technology, brilliant mind is coming up with new innovative ideas. From 19th Century, eminent people have brought a lot of changes in society, just by their ideas. Those who are famous today, contribute their support to the development of society. For these people, the journey was not so easy. Such as Elon Musk, CEO of SpaceX company, has also been rejected many times, faced criticism and people use to mock his idea. But he stood firmly, dodging every bullet thrown toward him. Now he is known by every person in the world. His company is competing with NASA. So, If a person believes in his idea, even though rejected by many, only has the capability to stand for long.
Apart from story of innovator and the big business man, even general people also face rejection and criticism in the life. Well, it not as easy as it seem. Some it become difficult to handle when every time you try and get reject at the end. For example, a person who is trying to get a job and get reject for idea or a perception he/she hold. Every single person has gone through this phase. It has become a part of human life. Those who pass it, learn from it and grow, are the only one who shine at the end.
Well, it was all about those who are strong enough to handle it with patience and perseverance. But, not all finger are equal. Everyone person has different capacity bear thing and situation. Sometime, person get so affect that they get into depression. They lose all the hope. Therefore, One who has a brilliant idea, but cannot stand through rebukes and criticism, give up at the end. Not saying that they are not courageous effort. It is all about our own capacity and believe in our self.
Hence, I conclude that People who believe in themselves and their idea, are the only one who shines in the end. Even though they have misbalanced in their path many times.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'criticized'.
Suggestion: criticized
...ught. Those who have big idea, has been criticize or rejected for few drawback and illogi...
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Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun drawback seems to be countable; consider using: 'few drawbacks'.
Suggestion: few drawbacks
...dea, has been criticize or rejected for few drawback and illogical concept. But, after facin...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
...ology, brilliant mind is coming up with new innovative ideas. From 19th Century, eminent peopl...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... many times, faced criticism and people use to mock his idea. But he stood firmly, ...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...in the life. Well, it not as easy as it seem. Some it become difficult to handle whe...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...ell, it not as easy as it seem. Some it become difficult to handle when every time you...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...difficult to handle when every time you try and get reject at the end. For example, a p...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'holds'.
Suggestion: holds
... reject for idea or a perception he/she hold. Every single person has gone through t...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... and situation. Sometime, person get so affect that they get into depression. They lose all...
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Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are the only one who shines in the end. Even though they have misbalanced in their path man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2050.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 452.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53539823009 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24248555921 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482300884956 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5342641935 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.0625 118.986275619 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.125 23.4991977007 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.34375 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22035393226 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517247091816 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699768844312 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13575456393 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630544409967 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 14.1392134831 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 48.8420337079 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 12.1743820225 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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