Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The ideas are what makes people unique with their capability to perform, analyse, think through, innovate, and also provide feasible solutions to generally difficult problems. People who tend to believe in their idea no matter what others think of or opinionate on the matter will leave a lasting legacy. For a few will support while others will even knowing that the idea will providently prosper tend to criticise and doubt thereby wanting to discourage a person from pursuing, this is because of their egotistic and selfish characteristics. However, I mostly agree that those who see their ideas through, tend to leave lasting legacy.
In this past paced world where a technological thinking and knowledge on the technical aspects are all reliant on the newer ideas and thoughts to tackle problems encountered by us on, if not regular, intermediate basis. Such a technological advancements under the plan was instigated by Elon Musk, an entrepreneur, who published an article claiming his idea to develop a 5th mode of transport that is very much faster than the Airplanes, which are deemed to be the fastest mode of transport on earth. He presented his idea globally and encouraged many people to take on this agenda to think through to develop this mode of transport which he initially called Hyperloop. Now the world is witnessing the sample models developed across globally and resulting in achieving greater speeds. This is certain, it will have a huge impact in Musk's biography leaving a lasting legacy for sure.
Another instance, where the business administrations around the globe have encouraged a policy brought by an industrialist and entrepreneur that evidently helps to reduce the unemployment rates around the globe. The ideas developed encountered several factors that acted as stumbling block to achieve success, but with the sheer determination, will and belief on the policy, Ratan Tata implemented a policy where his organizations will employ huge number of applicants from rural background who are face economic and financial issues but have sheer fundamental skills and ability to prosper. With starting skill development programs in rural areas at lower prices, his policy is to train and employ people into his organizations. This has now been recognized worldwide and many organizations have come forward to join hands with this skill development and employment policy.
However, some might argue that when the ideas do not tend to serve for useful purposes and might only lead to deterioration if implemented it is palatable for others to critize such an idea. In such case if the idea is futile it doesn't make very much sense to support it, but if idea is equitable enough to have a potential to counteract such a problem, instead of criticism, others should discuss along and provide their opinions on such matter. This not only help to solve problems, but also acquaints others with the awareness on the subject and bringing out their abilities to think on a general matter.
People will leave a lasting legacy if they are very much confident about their idea and its implementation rather than dethrowing the idea for the sake of others, who might not have a pure ideological knowledge on the subject matter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 352, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...few will support while others will even knowing that the idea will providently prosper ...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'advancement'?
Suggestion: advancement
...ntermediate basis. Such a technological advancements under the plan was instigated by Elon M...
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Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ber of applicants from rural background who are face economic and financial issues but ...
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Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
.... In such case if the idea is futile it doesnt make very much sense to support it, but...
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Line 9, column 183, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[6]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'pure ideological knowledge'.
Suggestion: pure ideological knowledge
... the sake of others, who might not have a pure ideological knowledge on the subject matter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2724.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 530.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13962264151 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83231115382 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515094339623 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 864.0 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8201328869 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.235294118 118.986275619 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1764705882 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94117647059 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206006864778 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774629145806 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795949620289 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12302337858 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670461380565 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.1392134831 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 100.480337079 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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