As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
We humans are subject to learning in everyday of our lives. There is an abundant knowledge pervasive around the globe, in variety of forms, in various subject matters, be it scientific, astronomical, economic, history or other, which when endeavored to deeply understand conveys for largely different interpretations. When we acquire excess of knowledge in any particular field, we become more acquainted that some times we forget the very beginning of certain study. It becomes more complicated and mysterious when we encounter knowledge that does not align with our imagination.
There are several scientific research carried out in order to establish a pattern to understand in the way the forms of life evolved on planet earth. They sure are still discovering fossils of species that roamed on this planet some several thousand years ago. With deeply focused into extracting the evidences regarding the early life forms, the biological domain keeps adding newer topics of study. These fossils discovered generally give different interpretations of life back in prehistoric era. Perhaps, with inclusions of different forms of biological species itself, our knowledge of understanding the different physical, anatomical structure of different class of species becomes more complicated and mysterious, with each different life forms are subject to different cell structure and completely different anatomy. Although acquiring the knowledge seems comprehensible, but only those dealing with such subjects can understand the complications it possesses.
Similarly, have we not always wondered how life originated on a rock in the space which evolved itself in so many billions of years before creating an atmosphere suitable for origin of life. When attempted to acknowledge the fact that we live on a planet which, however, enormously large with the resources, land, ocean, etc. is just one in billion of such type of planets in the space, don’t we feel amused. Earth is the 3rd smallest planet in solar system, the sun is probably the smallest star while there exist innumerable stars 100 to 1000 times bigger than our sun alone in our galaxy. Scientists are still endeavoring to understand the origin of the universe. Was the big bang theory, the origin or the destruction of any other universe, was it the lone process that helped form the universe? There are many interpretations that makes it more complex when knowledge acquired is in excess. Therefore, with more and more knowledge gained things become more complex and cryptic rather than comprehensible.
Additionally, history itself is posed to many different interpretations, although it has been passed from one generation to another in a hierarchy fashion. There exist many sculptures, scriptures, monuments, sacred places etc. which provide evidence of the presence of different civilizations in the world. However, is the history taught to us in our educational institutions regarding the royal dynasties, kings, queens that ruled the place in prehistoric times, valid? Probably, the history was not written as it was, but forged to convey important positive notions to the generations that followed. There are several historians arguing about the validity of historical claims mostly because the actual history is open to more interpretations and arguments, conveying that perhaps, what we learnt was indeed not comprehensive but complicated. The deeper the penetration into the fields of study, the more complicated our knowledge becomes.
In summary, as we acquire knowledge excessively, it becomes more incomprehensible, complex and mysterious as well. That being said one must gain profound knowledge enough to be comprehensible. Because there exist innumerable facts that lie beyond our imagination, that if endeavored to conceive becomes more complex and mysterious.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
We humans are subject to learning in everyday of our lives. There is an abundant know...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...urces, land, ocean, etc. is just one in billion of such type of planets in the space, d...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...dditionally, history itself is posed to many different interpretations, although it has been p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, still, therefore, well, while, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3266.0 2235.4752809 146% => OK
No of words: 589.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54499151104 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92639038232 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07824596011 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 306.0 215.323595506 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519524617997 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 1034.1 704.065955056 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3804213422 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.642857143 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0357142857 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03571428571 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237636751565 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699684569903 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848181394635 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15216572797 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620075020382 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 167.0 100.480337079 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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