Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Colleges and universities contribute enormously in shaping a student’s life. Also, the programs and courses offered by the universities along with the educational privileges that benefits a student attract them to pursue graduation in that particular university or college. One among the privileges offered by the universities should be to institute study abroad programs for students as it bestows sufficient skillsets that they will benefit from further in their career.
The primary consideration to institute this program will be to engage students to perceive knowledge not only based on academics, but also regarding the social, economic, cultural and traditional aspects of the foreign land. For examples, an interstate study exchange program between AT and SY college has seen many students from SY college learning traditional and classical music which is not a part of their curriculum in their state college. It has also seen steady increase in the intake of SY students in musical classes per year since the beginning of this initiative. This not only helps them gain experience with a distinguishing factor that sets out their lives apart, but also inspire and motivate them to further explore the other forms of differences and cultivate some that can improve their life overall.
Additionally, this program will offer students abundant opportunities like working abroad, working in a multinational company etc. that often adds extra pound to their career. Students gain broad perspective while in foreign country and also have an impact in their postgraduation. For example, University of Torrel, instituted study abroad program and has many MNC’s visiting and recruiting a large number of people because they are having an extra skillset that is knowing a foreign language which helped them have an advantage over other universities that did not institute such a program. Therefore, study abroad program should be instituted in universities and college with encouraging students to at least study one semester in abroad.
While some might argue that studying abroad requirement will place undue financial burden on less wealthy students, however, through better funding programs and financial schemes this can be resolved and also most of the universities are waiving tuition fees for students having good grades and they can also avail scholarships from universities thereby mitigating their financial burden of studying abroad. Therefore, studying abroad with its privileges help them to recover the finance spent on their universities later in their future career.
In summary, universities should institute study abroad program because of the advantages it provides for the students. It enables them to bridge cultural gaps if any, and motivates them to explore more about the traditions and diversifies their knowledge. It also helps them to pick up a new language which has an additional benefit for working in the multinational companies. If a student has financial problems, it can be resolved with better funding programs. Thus, universities instituting this program will yield better for their students’ career
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... has many MNC’s visiting and recruiting a large number of people because they are having an extra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[3]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'knows'
Suggestion: knows
... they are having an extra skillset that is knowing a foreign language which helped them ha...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... they are having an extra skillset that is knowing a foreign language which helped them ha...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2674.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53623188406 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90311087604 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484472049689 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 835.2 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.2387011347 60.3974514979 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.736842105 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4210526316 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238374119025 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916376041585 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586891388276 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15867126167 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293804123172 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... has many MNC’s visiting and recruiting a large number of people because they are having an extra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[3]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'knows'
Suggestion: knows
... they are having an extra skillset that is knowing a foreign language which helped them ha...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... they are having an extra skillset that is knowing a foreign language which helped them ha...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2674.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53623188406 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90311087604 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484472049689 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 835.2 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.2387011347 60.3974514979 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.736842105 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4210526316 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238374119025 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916376041585 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586891388276 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15867126167 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293804123172 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.