Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? As long as they meet deadlines and attend meetings, company employees should be allowed to work any hours they choose. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
work routine should be managed in such a way that it should not only provide benefit to an organization but also be suitable for the employee. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement of having flexible time even though work meets the deadline. I will expound on this viewpoint in following paragraph.
To begin with, Organisation has many projects which are assigned to different members of the association. Those members have to work in a team and for that, they have to appoint a fixed time to work together on it. if employees will be given a choice to work at any time then there may be a high possibility that project may not complete on time. For example, if a task is assigned to a team of four-member and there all are working with flexible time. What can possible in this that if all of them have to arrange a meeting then some of them hase to give extra time becuase they have already complete their work but as they are in the team so that have to be present whenever they are called. this will not affect they other work and uniformity will not be maintained. that the reason, I disgare with the topic as this kind of work life will disturb uniformity and decrease productivity.
Secondly, A person has other work to do in their life; some have to study, some has to take care of their home or some has to involve in other work. if freedom will give to work at anytime then life of human get disturbed. Suppose, you are are going to pick up your child form the school and suddenly you are called to attend a emergency meeting becuase of someone else problem. even though you have completed you part of work. this will not only create disturbance in your work life but also in your personal life. such kind of work routine will create disbalance in your life. it would be better, if work is done only done in a particular time for all. if would be much better to have fixed time give only to the office work otherwise result will strongly affect both human as well as organisation.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that freedom given at work to come at any time will tremendously impact both humans and the company. it is better to have a fixed routine to make things work smoothly and efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47058823529 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4443783632 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44362745098 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6836353799 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224625460351 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761280719934 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408416843485 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143110699525 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569621726232 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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