To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Cities within a society are home to major governmental institutions, trade centers and residence to huge population.
The population of the cities are much higher compared to towns and villages of the society, largely because of the abundance of trade and jobs. Cities are home to major trade centers. People from towns far and near come are attracted by the promise of more work and more pay of cities. As a result, cities see a huge influx of people from diverse backgrounds which not only creates a rich culture of its own, but also opens up more opportunities for jobs and businesses. A society's economic well-being can be deciphered from studying the expansion of cities to accommodate the ever-expanding trade and population.
As we just observed, the diversity of people coming from different parts of the society transform cities into a melting pot of the society's culture. Rich businessmen move to the cities to expand their businesses. Poor townsfolk shift for opportunities in the labor market. Financially as well as culturally, cities house a large diverse sample of the society's population. Statisticians would concur, that such a diverse sample of good pool size of a society are great for making statistical observations on trends and patterns that characterize the society.
The great cultural infusion happening in the cities, however, tends to make them slightly more indistinguishable from other cities. It is much easier to draw similarities between cities than to distinguish them. From a thousand-feet view, all cities consist of major institutions of their respective societies - government, universities etc. They all have high population and consecutively large residential areas, they have more buildings than trees. To find out the differences between cities, we would have to study the nuances such as architectural designs of the buildings, or other style patterns that are nothing but remnants of the past. If we want to study the history and cultural origins of the societies, towns and villages hold more information than the cities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27575757576 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07195644842 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539393939394 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3210434174 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.411764706 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102238052464 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349598746603 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302600427037 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622927845751 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331604756215 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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