To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
To “understand” the most important characteristics of a society, one must not only study its major cities but give a fair weightage to the rural life and culture. Every major city, before its inception has rooted from somewhat conservative rural backgrounds having a rich diversity in culture and tradition.
Some areas, now called “major cities”, had a geographical advantage over the others, in terms of trade, economy, easy mobility and thus became hotspots for technological advancements. So it is plausible to say that these “areas” experienced rapid overall growth, attracting a mix of people from the next nearest localities, this is what created “major cities” in the first place.
True, that when people move in large numbers to these cities, they do bring their respective social characteristics along with them, but when a lot of people with a variations in social backgrounds come to a place for their well-being, they generalize towards the respective cities, social norms, and have to leave some of their social background behind. Studying these major cities might give a “taste” of what the characteristics of the society actually is, but actually “understanding” it in depth, one has to go back to the roots, so one gets a clear idea about how, what and why the characteristics of the society is, what it is now.
Understanding the social characteristics involves studying how an individual mind in the society thinks, what are the aspects of the rooted culture, an individual brings with him/her. A whole and complete understanding of the society can be approximated, when these factors are studied meticulously giving equal weightage to major cities and its very roots.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, so, thus, well, as to, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 273.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42124542125 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62988323159 2.79657885939 130% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1825445037 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.0 118.986275619 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.125 23.4991977007 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.21951772744 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288263921559 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138359488748 0.0831039109588 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144009039828 0.0758088955206 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192754799047 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134189771005 0.0667264976115 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 14.1392134831 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 48.8420337079 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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