Claim: The surest indicator of a great nation must be the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Reason: Great achievements by a nation's rulers, artists, or scientists will ensure a good life for the majority of that nation's people.
Here, i’ll agree with the claim and its reason. The reason being that the most reliable indicator of a great nation is its socio-economic growth and the great works of its past and present rulers, artists or scientists have a really big influence as to how these cultures, traditions, mindsets flourish over time.
In a nation, the overall sentiments of a nation matters for building unity and integrity amongst themselves. A great ruler, is able to direct the sentiments of people in a unique way, so as to maintain peace within the society, he/she encourages a forward outlook, decides how the law should flourish and all these factors, over time, discipline the mentality of the society and dictate their present ways of thinking. Similarly scientists are completely responsible for technological advancements in the nation, which grows and expands the nation’s economic growth as well as its research environment, which is responsible for encouraging new ideas, innovations and techniques. I’ll also go out a limb and say that I agree that great artists too have the power to affect the the greatness of a nation as they have they help bring out the aesthetic value of the nation. Having the unique ability to actually implement the creativity in one’s mind, the works of great artists have an indirect emphasis on the nation’s cultures, traditions and mindset. This helps the society come together at subconscious level, all of which is made possible by great artists, painters, dancers, sculptors and so on.
All these factors help build a positive energy within a nation, affecting the lives of people in a positive way, from a socio-economic perspective. Which is responsible for eventually transforming a “nation” to a “great nation”. Which is why I also, strongly agree with the reason.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, look, really, similarly, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 295.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25762711864 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1263721492 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545762711864 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.9590160688 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370011920277 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147679824954 0.0831039109588 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885729756691 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27080003995 0.150359130593 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273866739015 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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