To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
I am in favour of this statement. One can study a major city and extract the characteristics of the society of an entire nation. Cities are what provide employment to a large chunk of the population of a country. Therefore, it is safe to say that a diverse population - folks from all the corners of a country - come together, settle in these major cities and this is what further leads to a display of characteristics that are products of mass intersocietal communication.
These major cities exhibit a summation of the society’s perspectives, motives and lifestyle. Outcomes of intermingled cultures and traditions is what shapes the lifestyle of an average city dweller. A lone city dweller manifests not just the signs of complying to cultural norms belonging to a single societal group, but cultural norms from several societal groups that surround him/her.
Cultures from all over a nation can be found in its major cities, sometimes amalgamated with one another. The characteristics found in the massive urban society is the mere reflection of collective rays of the traditions, cultures, occupations and lifestyles of individuals brought along from where they originally belong. This in turn, also influences the characteristics of those who don’t live in major cities. Therefore, the migration of characteristics from tribal to urban or from rural to urban, is what forms the basic framework of the characteristics of an urban society. These characteristics, though often altered to a certain extent due to the aforementioned amalgamation, might as well help trace the roots of the characteristics of a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 259.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30501930502 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41497328569 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563706563707 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7084856034 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19830895001 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735113748562 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733504321706 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121996597607 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802473195057 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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