To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Characteristics of a society is highly variable within a country's border therefore a complete understanding of it requires broader examination. A study conducted only on its major cities as presented in the statement would led to deceitful results. Major cities are melting pots where people from different nations or immigrants come to live to participate in economic activities and this places are in close encounter with other cultures. Therefore a study taking only the major city into focus can not reflect the society as a whole. It is impossible to find a single answer for what are the elements of a society therefore a broader study differentiating between places such as rural areas, urban areas, deserted places and seaside must be conducted for a better understanding.
First I want to talk about how major cities distinctly differ from other parts of the country. The economic activities in major cities are mainly well paying jobs in service sector, banking, technology companies which requires qualified and educated workers. This attracts not only educated people within country to the major cities but also attracts people from other countries creating a diverse culture which is far from being close to characteristics presented at a rural area. To expatiate, the life style of people in Berlin, one of the biggest metropolitans, has little similarity with a person living at Köln. The fast pace of life there, the requirements of the economic activities and the continues interaction with expatiates created a diverse and distinc culture. This life style and characteristics are distinct to urban life and more succesfully compared to an other major city such as London. Therefore, claiming that a major city will reflect the overall characteristics of a society is fallacious.
Secondly, even within the borders of a country the culture significantly differs. If the people are more isolated they show different characteristics if the people live in a seaside they show different characteristics. Its hard to find the reflections of the characteristics of people engaging in agricultural activities in an urban city. Also, major cities are not the places to look signs of coastal culture. Each society shows slightly different characteristics depending on their economic activities which are shaped by geography and climate. Therefore, to determine such characteristics this differences should also be considered.
To conclude, major cities inevitably reflects some aspects of a society but they are also shaped by many factors and people living there shows much similarities to people living in other major cities rather than the rest of the country. Hence, study of them would present biased results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2304.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 429.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37062937063 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10298351453 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473193473193 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 750.6 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8525306868 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.2 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.45 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123402347642 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439331637314 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023309368108 0.0758088955206 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795558317 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294981653141 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.