To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Indeed, major city is a great component of the society, but it is not the only important part. Society has a wide definition, it is constituted of lots of aspects such as cities, people, government, etc. The most important characteristic of a society is not about the city, or at least, is not about the architecture and tall building within the city. It’s about the people, the relationships between the people that form the society.
The first question needs to be answered is what’s the most important characteristic of the society is. The answer to this question can vary from person to person. To economist, the most important characteristic of a society is its economy system, the way how does the society profit from people’s trading. In this case, it doesn’t make any sense to study for rural areas considering most of trading centers located in major city. For example, if someone interests in America economy, it would make so much sense to study the city New York comparing with other cities. However, to an anthropologist, the most import characteristic of the society is about the people live in it, it’s culture and the diversity. In this case, only study the major cities won’t be able to cover all the cases. In order to obtain an object conclusion, one has no choice but to go through all areas in a country in order to have a comprehensive view of its culture and diversity.
The second question need to be taken into consideration is the amount of information available. The major cities of the country usually have a really long history. For example, in US, cities like New York, Chicago and Boston, they all have a long history. This means there will be a tremendous amount of information and materials available regarding to the change of those cities. Those historical material come from all kinds of sociologists and everyone of them may have different opinions towards the society lived in. With so many opinions exist, it would be hard for anyone who tries to extract the most important characteristic of the society. Let go in some sense, the characteristic of a society is not immutable, it keeps changing as a result of development, which in turn even add more difficulty for those who try to understand it’s characteristics.
Therefore, there are so many ways to grasp the characteristic of a society and there are so many aspects of the characteristic. Depending on one’s focus, the most important characteristic changes as well. So, it’s not a safe to say that study major cities is the best way to understand a society’s most important characteristic.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 442.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99095022624 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11364498925 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475113122172 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1639607017 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.272727273 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330349430502 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972008847102 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750153941325 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20993379003 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057708784767 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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