While some people believe that in order to understand the most important characteristics of a society, we must study its major cities, others believe that we can study a society by investigating some other cities or even countries. In my own view, both of them are reasonable, we should not only study major cities, but also, we should pay attention to some minor cities.
That is rational to study major cities, for a society, a major city like its capital can determine the value, the culture and the economics of the whole nation. We should recognize that major cities have more funds from governments in order to develop them, thus the economics should be the best all over the nation. So, the economics environments of major cities can reflect the ideal situation, from this, we can adduce a society’s plan of developing economics. Besides, economics, the culture is mainly influenced major cities, with a better economic environment, people will surely have more time and more money to define their own culture, major cities’ people can touch new things and new mind earlier, which can help them shape their own main culture. For most of minor cities or countries, the people of them are just simulating the main culture of major cities. Finally, after shaping a main culture, the value of people will also be recognized.
The major cities are also the head of a nation. Especially capitals, the leader of the nation lives in capitals, and most of policies are made and sent to other cities from capitals. The capitals can determine whether a country could work properly. If we study the development processes of a capital, we can find that how a country develops and thus we can predict a country’s future. Because if people did not take efforts in major cities like capitals, there is less possibility for them to consider other cities. The major cities can demonstrate the attitude of a society.
However, studying major cities does not mean minor cities or countries are not important, we all know that besides main culture, there are still many kinds of subcultures and different economic environments. Especially in a large country like China and America, these large countries have large areas and many different cultures. If we want to evaluate the characteristics of a society, we cannot ignore these aspects. When things come to the economics, that is the same. In China, for example, Shanghai and Beijing are two of major cities, they both have the best economic environments, the people in these two cities have a better salary and have more chances to take part in social activities. But such case is not universal in China. In the northeast or northwest of China, there are lots of poor people, their salary is less than half of major cities’ people. When we are focus on major cities, we still need to pay attention to minor cities, for major cities’ prosperity is not common.
All in all, that is not wrong for us to understand the characteristics of a society by studying major cities. On the contrary, we can get basic characteristics of a society immediately by this way. However, we should not only concentrate on major cities like I have discussed above, we should also pay attention to minor cities and countries in order to get a complete characteristics of the society. Only in this way, we can truly make it clear that how a society works and develops.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the policies') or simply say ''most policies''.
Suggestion: most of the policies; most policies
...er of the nation lives in capitals, and most of policies are made and sent to other cities from ...
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Line 7, column 306, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...se large countries have large areas and many different cultures. If we want to evaluate the ch...
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Line 9, column 370, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'characteristic'?
Suggestion: characteristic
...nd countries in order to get a complete characteristics of the society. Only in this way, we ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2828.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 580.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87586206897 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7177686343 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.405172413793 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 915.3 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 6.24550561798 304% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6915883327 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29743868265 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971813367759 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895638621471 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199133249235 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638932747909 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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