To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Is it the city that reflects most important characteristics of a society? I personally agree with the author. With the advancement of time, people have been residing in cities in an unprecedented way and, as a result, people have been leaving their relics for a long time and thereby making cities worth attentions from outsides.
First, cities are the places where we find most diverse population of a country. As a result, we find a plenitude of information about the culture and social structure of a country which enables us to dive into true nature of a society of the country. By way of example, Kathmandu is a capital city of Nepal and it boasts several world heritage sites: Pashupatinath ,a Hindu templ; Patan Durbar , an ancient palace; Swyhambhu Nath, a holy monastery of Buddhist and many other historical as well cultural places which were built by different Kings of Nepal in their ruling times. Now, anyone who wants to know about Neplease society can learn more from visiting cities than from any other rural areas of Nepal as there are not so many such historical places built in rural areas. Thus, one can develop a holistic approach regarding Neplease society by studying cities of Nepal.
Secondly, In general, cities have become the sign of development of a country. As people start living in more convenient places like cities, they have been able to preserve their culture and arts by setting museums and institutions where one can find plenty of information about ancient culture and arts of a society. For example, central library in Kathmandu Nepal has been a large source of books about Neplease literature and tradition. It also has collected and categorized books and literature according to different languages spoken in Nepal. On the contrary, such library is not viable in areas outside of the cities because of the lack of infrastructure and manpower necessary to run such library. So, by examining such places one can learn that Nepali is a most spoken language of Nepal; besides, one can learn about other most spoken languages of Nepal as well as cultural diversity of Nepali society.
Finally, the condition of the cities of a country can tell us a lot about the present and the future conditions of a country; in fact, organized, clean and developed cities indicate the development of a country and hence of a society in general. For example, the skyscrapers and busy roads in various cities in United States tell us about the economic prosperity of America. Admittedly, rural areas also can reflect the true nature of a society. In most of the cases, rural areas are museums in themselves; one can go and enjoy and understand the society actually by being a part of it. Nevertheless, cities provide with efficient way and resources required to learn about characteristics of a society.
In conclusion, one should study cities in order to understand important characteristics of a society since a lot of historical and cultural heritages are preserved in cities rather than outside of the cities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, finally, first, hence, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in general, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2536.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 510.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97254901961 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79172762471 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452941176471 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 838.8 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3142275075 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.21951772744 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161089857704 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583204435683 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788100367293 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112796769999 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690940147381 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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