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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The present scenario has only enabled the survival of the fittest and the most productive. With the profileration of unemployment and the government’s lax policies to curb the corrupted job selection process, small scale business has become the only means of surival for a majority of the unemployed masses. Having delineated a glimpse of the inadvertent neccessity of small scale business, it wouldn’t be superflous to quote that the government role isnt required in the burgeoning of the aforementioned small scale business.
In an attempt to extrapolate from the historical experience, it would be precise to infer from the economical situation of India, back in the beginning of the 19th century. When the new democractic Government had just established its base at that point of time, it had ensured unfretted freedom for small scale business to emerge and flourish. This meant that there had neither been any govermental procedure mandatory for starting up a business nor had the offical validation of the autenticity of the businessman been compulsory. According to the report published by THE HINDU on ‘The Employment of India’, the country had witnessed enormous flourishing of new small scale businesses which ensured the minimum requirement of meal of the day and a decent lifestyle for most of the unemployed masses.
However, couple of years later, the things changed drastically when the power had come into the hands of an autocratic group. There were disciplinarion policies and cumbersome rules and regulations which had to be followed before the mere establishment of a new business. Not to forget, the bribe and so-called “miscellaneous chargess” which the frugal unemployed man had to pay for the commencement of the business inaddition to the never ending governmental procedures. The stagnation of the country’s GDP during that phase and the mass suicidal of the unemployed youths, in different parts of the nation, who were unable to reconcile to fact to joblessness and hence pennyless life, corroborates the deleterious effects of government intervation and their intransigent system of rules and regulations.
Therefore, it can indubitably be inferred from the above enumerations that the intervention of the Government in small scale business has only led to inconceivable and inimical results. The people who resort to small scale business do so because of helpness and if not supported or encouraged, should atleast not be bothered and must be prevented from incessant meddling of the Government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: isn't
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Suggestion: economic
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Suggestion:
...yle for most of the unemployed masses. However, couple of years later, the thin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46231155779 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33226458629 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547738693467 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0852542274 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.230769231 118.986275619 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6153846154 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0585051889339 0.243740707755 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234789141941 0.0831039109588 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222400735134 0.0758088955206 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0356240511055 0.150359130593 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01490495386 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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