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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The present scenario has only enabled the survival of the fittest and the most productive. With the profileration of unemployment and the government’s lax policies to curb the corrupted job selection process, small scale business has become the only means of surival for a majority of the unemployed masses. Having delineated a glimpse of the inadvertent neccessity of small scale business, it wouldn’t be superflous to quote that the government role isnt required in the burgeoning of the aforementioned small scale business.
In an attempt to extrapolate from the historical experience, it would be precise to infer from the economical situation of India, back in the beginning of the 19th century. When the new democractic Government had just established its base at that point of time, it had ensured unfretted freedom for small scale business to emerge and flourish. This meant that there had neither been any govermental procedure mandatory for starting up a business nor had the offical validation of the autenticity of the businessman been compulsory. According to the report published by THE HINDU on ‘The Employment of India’, the country had witnessed enormous flourishing of new small scale businesses which ensured the minimum requirement of meal of the day and a decent lifestyle for most of the unemployed masses.
However, couple of years later, the things changed drastically when the power had come into the hands of an autocratic group. There were disciplinarion policies and cumbersome rules and regulations which had to be followed before the mere establishment of a new business. Not to forget, the bribe and so-called “miscellaneous chargess” which the frugal unemployed man had to pay for the commencement of the business inaddition to the never ending governmental procedures. The stagnation of the country’s GDP during that phase and the mass suicidal of the unemployed youths, in different parts of the nation, who were unable to reconcile to fact to joblessness and hence pennyless life, corroborates the deleterious effects of government intervation and their intransigent system of rules and regulations.
Therefore, it can indubitably be inferred from the above enumerations that the intervention of the Government in small scale business has only led to inconceivable and inimical results. The people who resort to small scale business do so because of helpness and if not supported or encouraged, should atleast not be bothered and must be prevented from incessant meddling of the Government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...flous to quote that the government role isnt required in the burgeoning of the afore...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
..., it would be precise to infer from the economical situation of India, back in the beginni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 55.5748502994 112% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 2260.96107784 96% => OK
No of words: 398.0 441.139720559 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46231155779 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33226458629 2.78398813304 120% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 204.123752495 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547738693467 0.468620217663 117% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.8473053892 131% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0852542274 57.8364921388 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.230769231 119.503703932 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6153846154 23.324526521 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 5.70786347227 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0585051889339 0.218282227539 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234789141941 0.0743258471296 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222400735134 0.0701772020484 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0356240511055 0.128457276422 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01490495386 0.0628817314937 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 14.3799401198 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.3550499002 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.197005988 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.5979740519 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.32208582834 120% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 98.500998004 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 12.3882235529 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.1389221557 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.9071856287 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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