"A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."
A curriculum needs to be carefully designed which is to target for a particular age group and the intelligence an average student is expected to have in that age group
Keeping this in mind, it is obvious that the government's intervention is critical in ensuring that curriculum is well suited for the student and uniformity needs to be maintained in the curriculum taught in the schools across the country. (govt intervention is always there. the question is whether it should make the sys uniform or keep diff curriculums)
Since, admission to any college requires all aspirants to take some standardized tests, imposing a uniform curriculum throughout the nation would ensure that no set of students will have an edge over the others by attending a school that boasts a superior curriculum which comes at great cost.
This would not only ensure that each student garners the basic knowledge regardless of his/her economic status but also help curb the fraudulent private school owners who have converted education into a thriving business.
Also, the government can ensure that the curriculum is designed by educational experts and that children are not over-burdened by the academics and have time for pursuing extra-curricular activities such as sports, arts and the like that are just as important. Moreover, a uniform curriculum that is designed to include basic knowledge of matters such as taxes, the economy, etc would ensure that students will be able to handle their quotidian tasks more efficiently and will be better prepared for the real world.
Since a uniform curriculum would be designed keeping in mind that the child receives basic knowledge of the different subjects, a child can explore the different fields and choose what he/she is most passionate about.
It can be undeniably concluded from the above statements that the implementation of a uniform national curriculum is of paramount importance since this would not only ensure all students receive equal education irrespective of their economic status but also prepare them for all walks of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
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Suggestion: Govt
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Suggestion: The
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Suggestion:
... curriculum which comes at great cost. This would not only ensure that each stu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24550898204 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87175540318 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52994011976 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0359550562 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.671736533 60.3974514979 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 219.0 118.986275619 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.75 23.4991977007 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154157405665 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661781399805 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557966093462 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793565370936 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486662969825 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 14.1392134831 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 48.8420337079 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.1743820225 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.2143820225 164% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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